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(Iran, Islamic republic of)

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From heaven to the earth and the platform sights
I can carry heavy things such a huge light
I am waiting for good news since long times
I have prayed a lot unless my dirty crimes
Every time I just hear the word: no…no…it couldn't happen or something like that
I suggest you to not looking for black birds and bats in the cave, you can find lots of them in my mind, and I mean a black bat!
I'm always in stress to hearing the word yes
I need somebody to clean this mind from a heavy mess
I want to weep, I want to shout, and I want to cry
Looking for a positive option, looking for a sweet hi
Destroyed from inside, a damaged inner soul
That white and clean face is changed by a depress coal
Lost plans, the feeling of ignorance, and my pervious soul that was unleash
Are cracking this poor body and all my wishes
When the voice of my near people goes up,
I like to tear my clothes, I like to go on a place that is top, but again I will hear the satanic word nope!
For God's sake …the soul that is rake…
My hands have to save me from the NOT lake!
Looking for an ANSWER, it can save me, can give me a fresh feeling
My soul will be blessed; it will be calm down, then ready for feeding!

Submitted: Saturday, July 28, 2012
Edited: Saturday, July 28, 2012


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  • Captain Cur (8/10/2012 2:10:00 PM)

    I say Yes! Nice write Elias. I liked the line,
    My hands have to save me from the not lake,
    a brilliant line. Well written.

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  • Unwritten Soul (7/29/2012 2:14:00 AM)

    A good poem! ! The answer is depend on how u capture the lesson cross in your eyes
    What answer do you want? .....I know...Wish you all the best then_Unwritten Soul

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