Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 159 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

And about money


There is a paper that sometimes acts the rule of the blood's brother, its name is money
Money, the thing that makes the humans to work hard and harder, it's as sweet as honey
The laws of the creation is unchangeable,
But what makes some people to think that they can change the rules with money?
Some people even let the rivers of their eyes to move, only because of that paper,
And these rivers make the seas of fake power and fake joys, my God, what is this money?
A graceful life with that paper, a life full of happiness
But we don't know everything about the money
This phenomenon can help the people who are sinking in poverty and disgrace,
But the question is: who will donate them the require money?
This thing sometimes can't really help,
Real love and spirituality can't bring with money
But people can do lots of things with that wealth,
There are thousands of people whose house have been destroyed by this money
Can it make the people to really love each other?
Or we should ask: please don't make the humans so pride, o' money!

Submitted: Friday, April 19, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, October 02, 2013

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Comments about this poem (And about money by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A) )

  • Rookie - 318 Points Poetheart Morgan (4/30/2013 12:53:00 PM)

    Money is a powerful ENERGY! It needs flows, change hands for hands, all the time. If you try keep it, you can do it, but if you dont share it, dont let it run your own ways, your money grows with blood, anguish, greed and spread evil on the world.
    Let the money flying into all peoples
    If you have just spend it with good will and it will return to you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (4/20/2013 2:16:00 AM)

    money is not always the reason for poverty.some times people themselves are the reason of their own poverties.~nb (Report) Reply

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