Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Rookie (11/26/1971 / New York)

An Intimidated Poet - Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

I lost my pen, love
it ran out of ink.
all I have left
is a pencil with
a chewed off
and the task
of writing
about you
with no mistakes.

Comments about An Intimidated Poet by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

  • Gold Star - 28,986 Points Kim Barney (11/10/2015 4:32:00 PM)

    Lovely! No longer than it needed to be. Every word counts. Great job! (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,190 Points Kay Staley (11/10/2015 11:27:00 AM)

    how charming and lovely. One of the best non rhyming poems I have read in awhile. So simple and sweet. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,511 Points Souren Mondal (11/10/2015 2:06:00 AM)

    A short yet brilliant poem.. The use of the pencil with 'chewed' eraser is beautiful... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,718 Points .., Rahman .., Henry (11/10/2015 2:00:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, simple but a beauty that is capable to touch a reader (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 41,611 Points Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/10/2015 1:51:00 AM)

    Simple and powerful poem....on Life, on relationship and on everything it fits perfectly. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,854 Points Kenneth Maswabi (11/10/2015 1:18:00 AM)

    Solid words on a short leash. This poem is full of confidence. I love it. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 950 Points Joe Breunig (8/6/2006 9:35:00 PM)

    An enjoyable poem; loved how the ending fit the poem's title. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Indiscreet Episode (1/18/2006 10:50:00 PM)

    I really like this one. Finding the right words does often feel impossible. How to capture somebody that means so much on paper? (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 693 Points Ernestine Northover (1/13/2006 3:46:00 PM)

    Oooohhhhh! that's a dodgy situation there Eila, I think breadcrumbs are supposed to work quite well as an eraser, though I've never tried it. Clever write indeed. Love Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 350 Points Alice Vedral Rivera (1/13/2006 3:39:00 PM)

    volumes in brevity

    avr (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lori Boulard (1/13/2006 2:55:00 PM)

    fantastic ending. Short but absolutely the right length for impact. Nice! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gina Onyemaechi (1/13/2006 2:54:00 PM)

    ...which you have done, Eila. Like Mr Shaffer says, so much meaning with so few, delightful words. A gem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mary Nagy (1/13/2006 1:05:00 PM)

    I really like this Eila! Very nice. Sincerely, mary (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eric Paul Shaffer (1/13/2006 12:52:00 PM)

    Eila, this is nice work. It is short, compact, and makes its point without a lot of extra words. In a poem like this, the very brevity of it forces the reader to make more of the words, and here that process is greatly rewarded. Good work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 13, 2006

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