Apprently I'Ve Offended You Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Apprently I'Ve Offended You

Rating: 4.0


I'll crawl back to my hole
not wounded
but curious
questions bubble
but get distorted
in the strong wind of autumn
if you listen to them pop
you'll hear my
apology
floating in your direction.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 10 November 2015

A short beautiful poem and meaningful write up.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 November 2015

An unconditional apology in the form of a poem. Nice write.8 points.

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Jerry Hughes 07 October 2005

this is a very clever piece of writing, Eila. Well done.

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