An Honest Offer Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

An Honest Offer

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“Madame do you need any help”?
Before speaking such words, get prepared for slap
If you are luck you will get welcome
Else your nose will be rubbed for some more time to come

They need something more
Lovely and affectionate words with enough of care
Few words of praise and honest approach
She may prefer grass hut to reach

Just offer nothing but kind gesture
Readiness to side with and eagerness to look after
She may refuse whole of the kingdom
Love might have witnessed such scene seldom

Show no hurry or any kind of hesitation
That is first condition for building good relation
Love demands no haste but careful entry
She is there at door steps to be called your lady

You may think why I write so much?
No it is needed for building trust
Two souls need gradual merger
It must be backed by an honest offer

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2014

welcome Maricela Ramírez, like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2014

Rohani Daud, Wajeeha Jaffry and Shery Naz like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1 Hasmukh Mehta

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2014

“Madame do you need any help”? Before speaking such words, get prepared for slap

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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