Along Road Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Along Road

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All along road I have walked
There is nothing to be talked
Silence is uppermost in mind
I am out for peace to find

The mind is in rage
The soul is in cage
No one seems to me as sympathizer
As if they have nothing to offer

I have always looked as an optimist
I have habit to insist
Even though I may not be given helping hand
But not rejected outright either by friends too

I was of my own
To think about unknown
Why love is found of so much demeaning?
I bothered less about it in life’s evening

Yes everybody is busy here
They are running after all over
The peace is eluding
Yet they are seeking and hiding

I feel so much about their plight
But I am afraid to touch and feel not right
It is virtual trap on the face
We are loosing somewhere in any case

I find no end
The road has reached no dead end
I must stop now and rest
This is what we think and try our best

Saturday, April 12, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

All along road I have walked There is nothing to be talked

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

Introspective Alexandria Heather3 hours ago I appreciate the poet's introspective rhyming.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

Good Mallika Dhar3 hours ago Nice Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

not sure James Wright3 hours ago The poet left the word a in most stanza's. I get the jest of the poem. This may be intentional on the poet part. Again I fully understand the poem without out it Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

welcome Maricela Ramírez, Shujat Ahmad and Mitos Jane Tugade Nepomuceno like this. 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

welcome rohani daud 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

Naidz Ladia woooo..well oldy, am still the same....ur poem s nice..write more 6 hrs · Like · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

Naidz Ladia along the road, oldy never walk alone 7 hrs · Unlike · 2

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

Poet Eric Nelson Shelman Superbly poetic, stupendous imagery, and thought-provoking! I love it Hasmukh Mehta! Great Write! 6 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

along the road, oldy never walk alone 19 mins · Unlike · 1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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