Alone In A Crowd Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Alone In A Crowd

Rating: 5.0


Life is blowing drop by drop,
Death is growing drop by drop,
Fields I'm plowing one by one,
Alone in a crowd next to none!

Ugliness is increasing day by day,
Beauty is decreasing day by day,
Everything unpleasing one by one,
Alone in a crowd next to none!

Frustrations roaring one after another,
Sweets are souring one after another,
Ethics I'm boring one by one,
Alone in a crowd next to none!

Thinking is matured years by years,
My pen is injured years by years,
Thoughts are censured one by one,
Alone in a crowd next to none!

Friday, October 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My thoughts are bringing loneliness for me.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neela Nath Das 10 October 2014

To be alone in crowd is the characteristic feature of some people.I think poets are more sensitive than the common guys.Loved reading.

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Elena Sandu 10 October 2014

Loved this poem, I was carried by it in both ways could follow its wisdom and dance by its flow. Yes a bit sad indeed, wonder if it could be the otherwise for loneliness to bring the thoughts.

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Kevin Patrick 19 October 2014

It is the cruelty of life that we must suffer, and even crueller that we suffer alone, your thoughtful words are deeply poignant as they are melancholic, this bares a hard hitting feel that I understand to well. It speaks to me and for that I love it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 12 October 2014

slowly slowly we are becoming jungly, and every one fears with other think tha day we will fear with our shadow..we are fearing with it but less

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Salini Nair 12 October 2014

awesome.............i like each line...............

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Ramesh Rai 10 October 2014

A poet is always alone.Loved your emotional thought.

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Khalida Bano Ali 10 October 2014

A thoughtful sad poem, sweetest are the sad songs and this poem is a model of sweetness.

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