Patricia Kelley

Rookie - 23 Points (March 11 1957 / Oklahoma)

All eyes are on Us


Oh, kiss me in January in the summer heat of Australia and whisper coolly with your breath that you'll always love me.
Let the five virgins envy me more. That's it, kiss me on the cheek. Kiss me on the lips with your manly hand on my hip.
Let the five virgins embarrassingly turn their heads.
I'll loudly and proudly, yell out.
I'll shout!
Look what my lover does to me. He kisses me more beneath the mango tree.
I'll spread the blanket for our lunch, while the curious virgins watch. We'll sit beneath the mango tree where the mangos are still waiting to be kissed by the sun.
We'll have some fun!
The virgins hate to watch me kiss a fellow.
They turn yellow.
We'll show them just how much you love me!
I'll yell out he loves me more!
He thinks I'm no bore.
But, I'm no whore.
The curly redheaded freckled virgin will envy me more.
The long blonde hair virgin kissed by the sun will shyly turn her rosy cheek.
The dark brunette virgin, with fair skin will stare, with her accusing eyes; while wanting you all the more.
While the dimpled twins will gaily smile and peek through their fingers.
You'll cup my cheeks with your hands and press your lips against mine, and we'll forget about the watchful eyes that are staring at us. Will kiss, and kiss until the virgins go away!

Submitted: Thursday, January 31, 2013

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A love Poem

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  • Freshman - 2,225 Points Patricia Grantham (6/29/2013 6:39:00 AM)

    What a beautiful poem Patricia. Seems like the sweetheart and her
    beau is at the center of attention. Prying eyes are staring upon
    their romantic kisses wishing that they were the objects of his
    affection. A well thought our poem. (Report) Reply

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