Alankar(Decor) -90 Poem by Indira Renganathan

Alankar(Decor) -90



The Complete Couplet is a poetic unit of 2 lines
that expresses a complete thought within itself.
Meter and rhyme are at the poet's discretion.

Attired, Adorned, Offered-
(Some complete couplets on the nine planets)

Sanguine Sun spotted red with ruby
Ingrained wheat for food salty sweetly

Milky Moon moving around white and pearly
Rich and ricey for minds and hearts happy

Coral Mars in enraged orange balled colorfully
Feasting leguminous with red legume family

Ever green Mercury enrolled with emerald verdantly
Fed with green bean pulsatively

Giant Jupiter yellowing in sapphire edifyingly
Grand connoisseur of chicpeas tastily

White Venus spangling diamonded masterfully
Vacillated for snowy lablab more ravingly

Slow and steady Saturn blues in sapphire auspiciously
Grubbing over sesame mirthfully

Ascending up the node yellowed in garnet luminously
Blackened Rahu pulsed for black gram suplicatingly

Descending down the node with cat's eye lustrously
Darkened Ketu squirms gulping horse gram blessingly

Monday, May 19, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,religious
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Chowdhury 03 November 2008

VERY NICE AND COLORFUL DESCRIPTION OF THE STARS AND THE SOLAR SYSTEM. READ MY NEW POEMS 1. MOVE TOWARDS AKNOWN GOAL 2. CREATE A STORY OF YOUR OWN 3. OUTSIDE WORLD

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Shimon Weinroth 30 October 2008

very colorful pictures and metaphors of the planetary system, profoundly viewed and philosphical,10

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Sivan P.G Menon 01 August 2008

indiraji.. rhyming thoughts...astronomical'....wavelength.... careful..handling of...poetic expressions... regards..and great inspiration..

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