Alankar(Decor)-258 Poem by Indira Renganathan
Alankar(Decor)-258
A Meaning Inferred(Tri-Fall)
Tri-fall is an invented verse form that groups lines and rhyme in threes.
Created by Jan Turner who suggests little or no punctuation be used.
The elements of the Tri-fall are:
a poem in 18 lines made up of 3 sixains.
syllabic,6-3-8-6-3-8 syllables per line.
rhymed, rhyme scheme abcabc defdef ghighi.
written with little or no punctuation.
A Meaning Inferred
'Time to get to office'
'Hurry up'
Every morning he says to her
And back home from office
'Hurry up'
'For an outing'he says to her
Daily it's his habit
Demanding
Each time he says she feels provoked
An obstinate habit
Commanding
Irksome though she remains composed
One day his tone changes
Ere dinner
'Please hurry up, close the kitchen'
He winks, she estranges
A manner
She retorts a meaning hidden
It is nice to note that you introduce new poetic forms. This is totally new to me. So grateful for introducing innovative forms. Poetry is ever evolving....! Thus he has finally given up his commanding tone and has become polite!
Alankar 258 on a new poetic construction, of which I never knew before, and what we call a sestet is also known as sixain, very informative and educating. Thanks for sharing.
A unique form, Indira. Like it. The ultimate stanza is amazing. A clever write. Glad I was able to read it. Very informative. Thank you for sharing.
Finally, I was able to go through with this poem. I have attempted a hundred times to read this poem but to no avail because of advertisements that keep popping up. I patiently wait and keep on clicking until I got this opportunity to read this one of a kind write.
Tri-fall is an invented verse and this has special rhyme and rhythm. We love such a beautiful poem which is decorated with ornaments. She retorts a meaning that is hidden. An excellent poem is very well penned.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Your Alankar(Decor) -258 is beautifully penned....wonderful ending dear madam! Thanks for sharing......10