Akhtar, In Response To Your Poetic Message: ....[ Short; Inspired By " Welcome Bri. My Coconut Tree ", By Akhtar Jawad ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Akhtar, In Response To Your Poetic Message: ....[ Short; Inspired By " Welcome Bri. My Coconut Tree ", By Akhtar Jawad ]

Rating: 5.0


Your poem's 2nd line stumps** me good;
I'd rewrite it for YOU, Akhtar, if I could.
But mostly I find your poem to be fine.
I sip it from your pen like a sweet wine.

Yes, to many, I, Bri, may be a mystery.
That's OK, as I'll go down in history.....
as my friend Akhtar's faithful teacher,
while he, for me, is a trusted preacher.



(February...1st...2020)


** stump[verb]:

"INFORMAL
(of a question or problem)be too hard for; baffle."

Saturday, February 1, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: friend,teacher
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
He is older (and MAY BE wiser) , but my English is "better".Ha ha.

Of course I'd need HIM to translate for ME if I went to Pakistan! ! !

bri

:)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 20 February 2020

like a sweet wine........fantastic. anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 February 2020

Beautifully crafted write with great humor as always.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 February 2020

A lovely tribute to a great man. Akhtar Jawad is one of the great Poets of Poem Hunter. Most of his poems are imbued with wisdom and insight.

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Kingsley Egbukole 01 February 2020

Bri Edwards, lively and jovial.

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