Neela Nath Das


Ah! What I Thought.. - Poem by Neela Nath Das

Ah! I thought I'd write,
With power and light.
No, darkness around,
But, musical sound,
Would be roaming around me!
I got a lot of friends,
as it is our trend,
to exchange opinion
and talking over phone.
I spent my days in glee.
I built a castle in air,
sitting on my chair,
But, I had no other aim
I kept on writing poem.
and sought nectar as honey bee!
and sang the mirthful song.
Oh, God! I was so wrong!
One day my friend vanished,
it seemed as if got punished,
I drowned in pensive sea.
A demon came in his place,
Though I did not see his face,
His scornful flashy mail,
threw me in utter hell
I forgot O god thee!


Comments about Ah! What I Thought.. by Neela Nath Das

  • Rookie Chris Blazo (10/4/2012 9:57:00 PM)

    Everything good has to end unfortunately. It's always a let down. I really liked this poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Priya Singh (10/2/2012 12:02:00 AM)

    SUPERB WRITE........WELL DONE.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,770 Points * Sunprincess * (9/14/2012 12:32:00 PM)

    Awesome poem...be wary maybe someday the demon will turn back into a friend...excellent write.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 916 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (9/14/2012 10:37:00 AM)

    A good write about your pensive thought for a lost friend. I too have sailed in the same boat. If you have leisure you can go through my 7 poems written on the loss of my dear friend Kasthuri.Thanks & best wishes. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,282 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (9/13/2012 1:21:00 PM)

    Your friends abound like every blade of grass underneath your feet (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,191 Points Valerie Dohren (9/13/2012 12:28:00 PM)

    Keep on writing the poems Nil - a great write here. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 13, 2012



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