Ah! What I Thought.. Poem by Neela Nath Das

Ah! What I Thought..

Rating: 3.9


Ah! I thought I'd write,
With power and light.
No, darkness around,
But, musical sound,
Would be roaming around me!
I got a lot of friends,
as it is our trend,
to exchange opinion
and talking over phone.
I spent my days in glee.
I built a castle in air,
sitting on my chair,
But, I had no other aim
I kept on writing poem.
and sought nectar as honey bee!
and sang the mirthful song.
Oh, God! I was so wrong!
One day my friend vanished,
it seemed as if got punished,
I drowned in pensive sea.
A demon came in his place,
Though I did not see his face,
His scornful flashy mail,
threw me in utter hell
I forgot O god thee!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris Blazo 04 October 2012

Everything good has to end unfortunately. It's always a let down. I really liked this poem.

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Priya Singh 02 October 2012

SUPERB WRITE........WELL DONE..

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Chandra Thiagarajan 14 September 2012

A good write about your pensive thought for a lost friend. I too have sailed in the same boat. If you have leisure you can go through my 7 poems written on the loss of my dear friend Kasthuri.Thanks & best wishes.

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Valerie Dohren 13 September 2012

Keep on writing the poems Nil - a great write here.

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