Indranil Bhaduri

Rookie - 239 Points (Kolkata, India)

Afternoon - Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

It was a gloomy afternoon.
The sky overcast with dark clouds..
Time passed by to make me realise,
Fate has been sealed in my own hands…
Seeking for the wet dreams
Which engulfed me every day and night….
I squeezed my soul to relieve myself of the pain
That was burning me for so long,
Waiting thereby for the awakening
Of the deep sensual touches
And kissing your dry lips
In the black and white painting!
Thus my skin melted
With the pleasure of my own self..
Meeting the silhouette of extreme passion,
Moaning with ecstasy
With my head high
Discovering my delicate obsession…
And then, it started to rain…!

Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri

Comments about Afternoon by Indranil Bhaduri

  • Rookie Monami Ghosh (1/21/2014 10:42:00 PM)

    I like the equating of emotions to a specific time of day.. a stream that runs in all of us but few care to pen. Nice read. I have one written on afternoon, shall share. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,737 Points Patricia Grantham (8/14/2013 7:17:00 AM)

    Love and pleasure in the afternoon. The rain added an extra
    aroma to the already enlightening passion. A very passionate
    and charming write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Neethu Prasanna (3/16/2013 12:33:00 AM)

    Wonderful write! poetry runs through your blood (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,621 Points * Sunprincess * (10/3/2012 9:53:00 AM)

    wow! a delightful afternoon of ecstasy and the rain made it complete. :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 885 Points Kaila George (9/24/2012 4:34:00 PM)

    Your words flow so easily from your how you pain the story with each stroke...its wonderful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (9/16/2012 4:41:00 PM)

    very passionate and allusive, rich blended write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samantha Robinson (8/18/2012 11:33:00 PM)

    Again very very good. My poery is blunt but my prose is another beast altogether. Samantha (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chris Blazo (8/18/2012 3:39:00 PM)

    Great poem about deep, erotic passions. Thank you for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (8/13/2012 12:42:00 PM)

    so beautiful and full of emotions.....such a remarkable piece sir loved it
    best wishes,
    payal (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 13, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, September 17, 2012

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