Advice To A Boy Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Advice To A Boy

Rating: 5.0


If she is a diamond..
She will sparkle..on you..
You boy..will glow..
she will shine...brighter..
Than the sun..when with..
Your cloth..on her you buff..
Boy..if you are..a real boy..
She will know..your song..
long before you sing it..
Boy when she cries..hide..
Her tears..inside one heart..
Boy when she is gone..you..
Will see the coal..on fire..
Boy make sure..she looks..
You in the eye..does it burn..
Brighter when you..kiss her..
Boy you will...have to die..in..
Her..then again..be new born..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obed Souza 15 July 2009

You´re too clever... Manipulator of love! .... Nice doing! Lovely and pleasant to read.

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Tsira Goge 14 July 2009

Very nice... The boy knows well, who does not burn's - does not shine's..10...

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Mary Joy Lumanog 14 July 2009

is that true? I can't imagine..well maybe if your meant to be..what you think is it poetry?

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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