S.zaynub Kamoonpuri

(aaaa.) Mankind In Dreamland - Poem by S.zaynub Kamoonpuri

(i hav a lil time off befor travelin again but incase i dont respond or coment pls know i had to travel sudden.)


Pestered and pursued
by unknown foes
A topsy turvy land
where snakes could have horns
and cows can have fangs.
Night'mares' where the day's stallions
make mountains out of molehills

A chance to witness greek mythology-like creatures for real
for dreamland tis a place for the unreal surreal.

Those hair-raising scary scary dreams
beset with horrified silent screams!

For us to wake up pinching ourself
and sigh with relief there's neither tiger nor elf.

All in all, dreamland's fascination
for extra-ordinary exaggeration
and tall-tale imagination

where myth and legend come to life
An amalgam of fiction and real strife

Where assorted monsters of the mind
reign supreme in that REM sleep of our kind.

Yet on the other hand the sweet sweet dreams
where fantasies form mirages bordered by fanciful seams.

Where castles in the air float gently down to earth
only to shoot back up nowhere from the awakened one's berth.

Dreamland's a great place for any princess or fairy fair
for daydreams extend into the night and linger on there.

A quote I took to heart and it to console all and sundry
'that if your sweet dreams don't come true, don't you fret
for atleast your nightmares didn't come true either,
so just heave a sigh, by and by.

Topic(s) of this poem: Fashion

Comments about (aaaa.) Mankind In Dreamland by S.zaynub Kamoonpuri

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (3/19/2014 10:55:00 PM)

    you created a web of imagery, illusions in this piece, you beautifully explained things beyond natural......great wrk dear (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,509 Points Melikhaya Zagagana (3/10/2014 12:48:00 PM)

    Emphatically articulated unity of words. I like it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 274 Points Words' Knight (12/27/2013 12:05:00 PM)

    A fantastic professional writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Rubab Atwal (12/2/2013 10:26:00 PM)

    excellently written..enjoyed it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 288 Points Aeronius D. Mccoy (11/29/2013 11:51:00 PM)

    I enjoy the imagery in this poem and would love to see it developed even more. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 19 Points Ayesha Jabbar (11/15/2013 5:32:00 AM)

    beautifully written! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,494 Points Unwritten Soul (9/11/2013 8:11:00 AM)

    I love the imagery you created in this nightmare...and dont forget to add tarantula with butterfly wings hahaha...
    yes we better be beauty blind for that...because in real life, sometimes beautiful human, and humankind look nice but hidden inside just worse nightmare than you can get! ..i like this poem Zaynub! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Gary Kedron (9/10/2013 11:46:00 PM)

    Avoid ridding the backs of Nightmares
    From thy Stallions crazed Haram....

    I love poems about dreams weather by day or by night
    This be great poem a fanciful write! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Gary Kedron (9/10/2013 11:38:00 PM)

    Avoid ridding the backs of Nightmares
    from thy stallions crazed Haram....

    I love poems about dreams weather by day or by night, a fanciful write indeed! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (8/21/2013 7:56:00 PM)

    lovely a combination of scary and beautiful. good imagery (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/24/2013 4:19:00 AM)

    your imagination and used imagery is beyond my thought so nice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Colin Bradley (3/20/2013 8:52:00 PM)

    very creative with imagery (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madina Morris (3/20/2013 8:09:00 PM)

    I love the imagery you use in this poem. Very great job. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,678 Points Valerie Dohren (2/10/2013 4:55:00 PM)

    Great poem about dreams - some good, some bad. Very imaginative write, enjoyed reading. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,404 Points Valsa George (1/27/2013 5:38:00 AM)

    This is a lovely poem! Dreams scary and dreams rosy, they make up our nights besides our daydreams that extent into the night! ! But without them, how barren life would be! ! Enjoyed reading this! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 269 Points John Shea (1/15/2013 9:02:00 PM)

    I am a chef and sometimes I remember a dream for a new dish. Sometimes my nightmares come true and my job becomes harder for the youth that teach. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,077 Points Paul Brookes (1/15/2013 6:05:00 AM)

    Superb images and well crafted Takes you to fantasyland........................................: O) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 269 Points John Shea (1/14/2013 8:39:00 PM)

    so I just heave a sigh by your leave my leave and yours my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Nithin Purple (1/13/2013 8:59:00 AM)

    zaynub well written piece, nicely did it nice theme too (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,460 Points * Sunprincess * (1/12/2013 6:32:00 PM)

    oh hear s. you are marvelous..i love this one and the end quote is perfect! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 13, 2014

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