A Year Without Rain Poem by Aisha Alansari

A Year Without Rain

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A year without you is like a year without rain,
since you came into my life..
everything became bright,
I used to live in the dark..
wondering..everything was a question mark.

A year without you is like a year without rain,
I want you..I need you,
without you my lifeis dry,
even though I was always shy..
I need you..you helped me in various of things..more than
the size of the massive sky.

A year without you is like a year without rain,
every tear I cried was from my heart..
suffering from pain,
you'll always be on my mind,
you're so hard to forget..a nice person like you is very hard to
find,
I know you'll not be here or there..anymore,
the important thing you're happy somewhere.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is for my Fav. teacher (English teacher) Ms.Cherine.She helped me with alot of things like including poems and she's my inspiration if being an English teacher.However now she's leaving and I really feel bad so I wrote this poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ugoh Ifeanyi 21 July 2012

The poem is touchy and nice, and obeyed the rules of poetry.i love it

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Nice poem... Well written..

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Leslie Philibert 21 July 2012

I like this, a poem written with care and style

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Olayemi Ayo 21 July 2012

Your poem is lovely, well written.

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Precious Okidika 21 July 2012

this is more of love than sadness, but both were properly mixed in right proportion. Good job

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Joseph Poewhit 21 July 2013

Hits the nail right - WITHOUT RAIN

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Hommayra Amini 23 July 2012

Nice poem... I like it...

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Lynn Stillman 23 July 2012

This truly beautiful. How lucky you are to have had such a wonderful mentor. Lynn Stillman

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Lynn Stillman 23 July 2012

Very beautiful and touching. You are so lucky to have such an inspiring English teacher. Lynn Stillman

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Savita Tyagi 23 July 2012

Lovely tribute to a teacher. Keep writing.

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