A Universal Character Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Universal Character

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Jealousy has taken her toll
She is not at all responding to call
What kills her daily in wrong way?
She is drifting and slowly going away

I belong to all in literally sense
To keep confined to one is utter nonsense
Literature is such a vast field
You need people's fancy to be held

How do you come to know human nature?
Is it by reading books to make sure?
To come closer and know more
Or just be in close proximity and adore

You always try to build strong bridge
Look so innocent in simple cloths of without crease
It must remain your endeavor to be near
Exchange as much as possible without fear

Many people may enter your life without notice
You may appreciate and offer some of the promises
To render all kinds of help with soft feeling
Here comes stage where it does all kind of killing

You express your feeling in words
That takes you in all the directions to look forward
You have destination with clear goal and aim
How come some one else enter all of sudden and claim?

It is hard to surrender to possessiveness
It cuts much of your peace and is apparently seen on the face
It is impossible to sever the relation just out of fear
Yet it has its own draw backs to bear

Poets have universal character
They have to fit in every role as an actor
What does it make to look in others eyes?
Fantastic way of doing things with easiness

I have explained and may do so each time
It is misunderstood and quoted wrong sometimes
You have special liking for someone
Still it must remain cordial and disturb none

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 January 2013

Universal character Jealousy has taken her toll She is not at all responding to call

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2013

Bell Noor Much to read and undo here! There is no need to force a fit to each and every character. Each act, requires an script, audience, stage, actor who is able to take it on...however, never everything is the same, since the actor will contribute to act and act still will receive diffrent direction, depending on the audience reaction. A act therefore for never fit rather, actually it doesn't! The difference is the attraction. 2 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2013

David J Delaney I really enjoy reading this Hasmukh....well done...(-: 10 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2013

Seen by 16 Queeny Gona and Jane Lynahan Karklin like this. Jane Lynahan Karklin Fabulous poem. 18 hours ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2013

Geor Tha Poet How unfair..wonderful piece though 6 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2013

Enigmatic Mahogany and Lovely Lucy like this. Enigmatic Mahogany REMAINING CORDIAL AND DISTURBING NONE! THANKS SO MUCH FOR XPRESSING YOURSELF! 2 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 January 2013

Ramdas Bhandarkar when mind listens to silent song of heart, warmth felt even in chilling cold; looking into depth of own, stars and galaxies whirl back into source. 6 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 January 2013

Ramdas Bhandarkar when mind listens to silent song of heart, warmth felt even in chilling cold; looking into depth of own, stars and galaxies whirl back into source. 6 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2013

Seen by 8 Steven Glenn likes this. Steven Glenn Beautiful poem my friend thank you 4 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2013

Seen by 12 Annah Toboso and Titus Ongeri like this. Maadan Son'of Ombati impressive 20 hours ago via mobile · Like · 1

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