Tribhawan Kaul

Freshman - 558 Points (01-01-1946 / Srinagar (J & K) India)

A True Lover - Poem by Tribhawan Kaul

I love you
I love you too
says every Mr. A, B and C
to every Ms. E, F and G.

Significance.....few know
Substance........a few care
Semblance......the few realize

Love is killed at alter of love
an eagle mulls killing a dove.

Acronym of love bares it all
L.....for lust
O.....for orgasm
V.....for virility
E.....for ecstasy
Any one absent heralds showdown
whites, wheatish, yellows or browns

Affection, concern, longings
caring and sharing
passengers of backseat
bodily attributes only subjects,
left to treat.

I forbid self to say
I love you
I rather prefer to say
I miss you.....I miss you
If I truly love you.
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

What is true love? Is always debatable.

Comments about A True Lover by Tribhawan Kaul

  • Silver Star - 3,587 Points Kavya . (11/19/2013 5:59:00 AM)

    a good one and rightly said that true loving is missing.........One who fills the vacuum in your life is your true love! (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (11/19/2013 3:24:00 AM)

    as you so truly say, i miss you reflects love's durability while the other is often merely impulsive. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,065 Points Wahab Abdul (11/19/2013 3:01:00 AM)

    this is your best trying in to give variation to poetry structure and are 100 percent successful and i agree with what Valsa Said in her comment...10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,404 Points Valsa George (11/19/2013 2:57:00 AM)

    'I love you' is a statement often said, but never lived! This poem has a unique structure and I thoroughly agree with what you have tried to express here! Enjoyed this meaningful write! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 19, 2013

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