A True Lover Poem by Tribhawan Kaul
A True Lover
I love you
I love you too
says every Mr. A, B and C
to every Ms. E, F and G.
Significance.....few know
Substance........a few care
Semblance......the few realize
Love is killed at alter of love
an eagle mulls killing a dove.
Acronym of love bares it all
L.....for lust
O.....for orgasm
V.....for virility
E.....for ecstasy
Any one absent heralds showdown
whites, wheatish, yellows or browns
Affection, concern, longings
caring and sharing
passengers of backseat
bodily attributes only subjects,
left to treat.
I forbid self to say
I love you
I rather prefer to say
I miss you.....I miss you
If I truly love you.
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as you so truly say, i miss you reflects love's durability while the other is often merely impulsive.
this is your best trying in to give variation to poetry structure and style..you are 100 percent successful and i agree with what Valsa Said in her comment...10
'I love you' is a statement often said, but never lived! This poem has a unique structure and I thoroughly agree with what you have tried to express here! Enjoyed this meaningful write! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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a good one and rightly said that true loving is missing.........One who fills the vacuum in your life is your true love!