A Tremor In My Heart Poem by Orlando Belo

A Tremor In My Heart

Rating: 5.0


I was talking with some friends
when you appeared out of the blue.
My voice failed in mid-sentence,
at the first sight of you.

When you turned and looked at me,
a tremor in my heart took place.
My heart raced and began thumping.
I saw my dreams on your face.

Your next glance brought with it a smile,
which immediately captured me.
My friends saw the effect you were having,
but you were all I could see.

I apologised for stopping in mid-sentence,
but I had become completely mesmerised.
My friends laughed, jeered, and taunted me,
but they could not see the love in your eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 25 December 2021

Nicely expressed thoughts and feelings, lovely and very passionate write. Thanks for sharing and merry Christmas.

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Kim Barney 24 December 2021

Love this! Totally believable and captivating!

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David Wood 24 December 2021

It's always the same, love does make you tongue tied.

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