A Taste Of Heaven … 1103-2k16 Poem by saadat tahir
A Taste Of Heaven … 1103-2k16
Never a space may foster gloom
Nor a shred of fear or doom
If its doors stay firmly shut
Bondage twines too, keenly cut
Keep out worry, consuming loathe
With love and care if you clothe
Mundane things, simple words
Fly and flit like twittering birds
Swap the lonely sorrow today
Adorn with hope, your every day
Then! our lives may take a turn
To let some incense candle burn
Poems erupt from eyes and lips
A taste of heaven our being sips
saadat tahir
11, March-2k16
Unaizah-KSA.
Lovely imagery throughout the poem to create a heavenly picture of life. Enjoyed reading thoroughly.
This is the difficult road of love, which we travel because we sense there is mutual joy at the end of it. Bu the early stages are frustrating. But that amorous effort is more compensated by success. Your closing lines are absolutely beautiful in evoking the wionder of love achieved in mutual happiness - POEMS ERUPT FROM EYES AND LIPS / A TASTE OF HEAVEN PUR BRING SIPS.
Mundane things, simple words Fly and flit like twittering birds beautiful poem n ya mundane things have something unusual always... thank you
very clear messages in this beautiful poem. every line is lovely
you can clearly say what you realy wanted us to understand in a few words, directly, clever and its rhythm is awesome.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 2:42:35 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Beautiful flowing couplets with an esoteric touch in a metaphysical stream. Lovely write.