Dee Corpolongo

Rookie - 212 Points (09/ 27/64 / New York)

A Summers View


As I walked along the forest path
that led out to the sea
The thoughts that lingered on through my mind
were as beautiful as they could be

The oceans cool breeze and crashing waves
gave me a feeling I can not forget
The gathering of squawking seagulls
the changing palette of another sunset

As I stopped to watch the colors
that seemed to set the sky aflame
Some chills had ran right through me
I wondered if anyone ever felt the same

I had to smile just in knowing
what a beautiful world we share
just look and you'll discover
what a wonder there is out there.

Submitted: Monday, August 05, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, August 06, 2013

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Just expressing my feelings for today!

Comments about this poem (A Summers View by Dee Corpolongo )

  • Freshman - 1,738 Points Smoky Hoss (5/5/2014 9:07:00 AM)

    Wow, what wonderful words from the soul on natures grandeur. Isn't she (nature) truly something amazing? I love the poem Dee. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,456 Points * Sunprincess * (12/23/2013 5:51:00 AM)

    beautiful...I agree our world is so wonderful and I wish to go
    discover every inch of it...and meet all the peoples from other
    countries... just imagine how nice that would be...but this is a
    dream which can never be achieved.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,654 Points Ramesh Rai (9/5/2013 9:47:00 PM)

    I had to smile just in knowing
    what a beautiful world we share
    just look and you'll discover
    what a wonder there is out there. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/29/2013 3:34:00 PM)

    you paint a beautiful picture with words Dee, the images are great. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,022 Points Unwritten Soul (8/23/2013 6:02:00 AM)

    Display your feeling here with beautiful thing for us to see..I love the expression you did here...what a summer view! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (8/23/2013 12:53:00 AM)

    Watching a beautiful sunset is ever a delight! The sky turning crimson and the golden light falling, the crashing breakers, the seagulls squeaking.... all these make us lose in a world of beauty! ! Lovely write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,133 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/22/2013 10:12:00 AM)

    Beautiful pictured poem painted on the canvass of my mind
    for from time to time to see I close my eyes to blind
    The chill was a lost spirit onward to heaven I'm sure
    racing to the light for colors much more pure (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,047 Points Valerie Dohren (8/13/2013 5:17:00 AM)

    Beautiful Dee, some lovely imagery and very well put together. Well done, a great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,397 Points Lyn Paul (8/12/2013 4:53:00 PM)

    Yes pure beauty in nature Dee. Particularly our ocean. I feel and see this beauty every day too and love capturing these sights. Love your forest path taking you out to see (Report) Reply

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