Dee Corpolongo

Freshman - 705 Points (09/ 27/64 / New York)

A Summers View - Poem by Dee Corpolongo

As I walked along the forest path
that led out to the sea
The thoughts that lingered on through my mind
were as beautiful as they could be

The oceans cool breeze and crashing waves
gave me a feeling I can not forget
The gathering of squawking seagulls
the changing palette of another sunset

As I stopped to watch the colors
that seemed to set the sky aflame
Some chills had ran right through me
I wondered if anyone ever felt the same

I had to smile just in knowing
what a beautiful world we share
just look and you'll discover
what a wonder there is out there.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Just expressing my feelings for today!

Comments about A Summers View by Dee Corpolongo

  • Smoky Hoss (5/5/2014 9:07:00 AM)

    Wow, what wonderful words from the soul on natures grandeur. Isn't she (nature) truly something amazing? I love the poem Dee. (Report) Reply

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  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (9/5/2013 9:47:00 PM)

    I had to smile just in knowing
    what a beautiful world we share
    just look and you'll discover
    what a wonder there is out there. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (8/29/2013 3:34:00 PM)

    you paint a beautiful picture with words Dee, the images are great. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (8/23/2013 6:02:00 AM)

    Display your feeling here with beautiful thing for us to see..I love the expression you did here...what a summer view! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George Valsa George (8/23/2013 12:53:00 AM)

    Watching a beautiful sunset is ever a delight! The sky turning crimson and the golden light falling, the crashing breakers, the seagulls squeaking.... all these make us lose in a world of beauty! ! Lovely write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (8/22/2013 10:12:00 AM)

    Beautiful pictured poem painted on the canvass of my mind
    for from time to time to see I close my eyes to blind
    The chill was a lost spirit onward to heaven I'm sure
    racing to the light for colors much more pure (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren Valerie Dohren (8/13/2013 5:17:00 AM)

    Beautiful Dee, some lovely imagery and very well put together. Well done, a great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul Lyn Paul (8/12/2013 4:53:00 PM)

    Yes pure beauty in nature Dee. Particularly our ocean. I feel and see this beauty every day too and love capturing these sights. Love your forest path taking you out to see (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 6, 2013


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