time, drowns quick, like a stone in sea
in a day 10 times why do you have to pee
if you want to save your time, you better listen to my every line
only empty when you start to overflow
I bet with time your talent would grow
my friend your life like a sun then would shine
if you listen what I say or do what I tell you to do
in a day just go one time to the loo
and see how you roam in town just like a king
and if you listen to this next advice
for this you would have to pay no price
while you pee your favorite song you can merrily sing
so from today , no more standing in queue
or pee inside of the oceans blue
you only pee just once, at night before you sleep
so now you pee only 365 times in an year
you might wet your pants but still don’t fear
tell me my friends this promise would you keep
from now, in a day you will save an hour
no more wasting your time in finding a tower
or a pole that once you would find to go for pee
that extra time you could spend with your girl
you can sing, you can dance, with her you can twirl
if you want, with her you can share this advice
time my friend weighs more that the gold
so from today, your pee you have to hold
and add in your boring life, a little spice
You have done some terrific work. On a cold, empty, frigid Indiana night, this one made me laugh, and that is what I needed. Thank you for that, Kanav!
Why inept.? ....it's full of humour, full of romance, full of insights......just you need to crack it.........Kanav............ you are simply superb.........I enjoy reading your poems.....
Once Aswath Ramalingam had written a similar poem and it is your turn now Kanav What you have written here, I hope has given you a little break from taking up the usual stuff... There ends the matter.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
.............this made my day..........truly impressive.......lol