kanav justa

Veteran Poet - 1,059 Points (Shimla)

A Tree In Thought Of His Mother


spring dies
she watches the leaves decay
winter mirror in her eyes
the sun lightyears away

yet a flower blooms
Safely in her bosom
oblivious of the winters around

as she protects him from the vultures old
from the scorching heat and the weather cold

even the strongest gale
must uproot her first
before it could pick the flower young

as long as she is there
the flower shall bloom in every season
without fail

and now the flower has become a big tree
in dreams of his sleep he sometimes sees
how she sailed away to some foreign place
in the winter he longs for her grace

and when everones gay, in the season spring
and the birds at the sky they sweetly sing
wonders that tree in an empty room
how his flowers forgot to bloom

Submitted: Friday, January 17, 2014
Edited: Saturday, January 18, 2014

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  • Gold Star - 10,568 Points * Sunprincess * (1/16/2015 12:34:00 PM)

    .......dear kanav :) this special tribute poem is one of the best tribute poems, I have ever read...if not the best....and it is definitely one of the most special poems you have ever written with your magical ink :) ....so easily you penned it so beautifully...and I know it comes straight from your heart.....I love it :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,441 Points Rajesh Thankappan (12/7/2014 10:19:00 AM)

    As children grow up they under the pressure of their peer group sometimes strays away from their parents thought they hold them firmly at heart. An excellent poem and loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 214 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/8/2014 11:11:00 AM)

    This is a lovely, thought-provoking poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Shraddha The Poetess (3/3/2014 1:29:00 AM)

    veryyyyyyyyy beautiful as well as emotional tribute to maaaa.....!
    beautifully written with great technique of metaphor...
    wonderful..100 on 10, .. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,586 Points Bri Edwards (2/28/2014 6:01:00 PM)

    i'll send Kanav a message about this one. thanks for sharing. ;) bri (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Har Srishty (2/2/2014 10:02:00 AM)

    Kanav ji, excellent the poem is perfect tribute, to mother. You convey your feeling clearly. The use of metaphor makes the poem attractive. Such poems as yours are more relavent in android age. Thanks for creating such a poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/29/2014 8:43:00 AM)

    Beautiful flow of words from your pen. She protects him from vultures old, severe heat and cold. Yes, very true said. she cover her child with blanket of warmth protection. Who else can do? When flower had bloomed into tree, he longs for her grace. Very true said...Wonders that tree in an empty room.........I loved each lines.. Loved this poem very much Kanav. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Har Srishty (1/28/2014 12:26:00 AM)

    Kanav, magnificent poem. Poems written on mother charms me. Your poem is as equal to the poem of kamala Dass which i read months ago. You imagination is very rich. THANKS Again. Jooking forward to more poems (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 408 Points Anthony Burkett (1/25/2014 9:30:00 AM)

    Wonderful imagery! Most heartfelt bittersweet emotion... I am so very delighted to become acquainted with your pen. Touché Sir Poet! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rishabh Bidya (1/24/2014 10:33:00 AM)

    Just as always, great work! ! ! : D (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,560 Points Dinesh Nair (1/23/2014 1:11:00 AM)

    Once a blooming flower tells its tale it will have the same fragrance.
    'The Tree in Thought' has many saplings and this tale will be told to many and many.
    A poem that made me nostalgic... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,094 Points Valerie Dohren (1/22/2014 11:52:00 AM)

    A beautiful tribute to your mother Kanav, and excellent use of metaphor. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Ruby Mostazir (1/22/2014 4:53:00 AM)

    very very touching! i can relate this with my mom & i will definitely do all this for my daughter too......
    nice poem Kanav, i will vote 10 for this :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,441 Points Rajesh Thankappan (1/21/2014 9:06:00 PM)

    A very touching poem and a full 10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,361 Points Noreen Carden (1/20/2014 12:50:00 PM)

    Hello Kanav this poem is beautiful your flowers are definitely blooming here.You have a great way with words
    which you use to paint beautiful picture (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,601 Points Lyn Paul (1/20/2014 5:48:00 AM)

    Your heart is golden Kanav. Such beautiful words another reason to make Your Mother so proud (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 605 Points Shahzia Batool (1/19/2014 12:39:00 PM)

    ..........it touched, Kanav! : ((( (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,636 Points Susan Lacovara (1/18/2014 9:59:00 AM)

    Your true expressions read like confessions...your mother must have been surely proud, of your talent, .and the beautiful way in which you set it alight....I will continue exploring your penned pieces, with great enjoyment and anticipation. PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Rubab Atwal (1/18/2014 3:47:00 AM)

    A very touching poem, beautifully expressed.. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,243 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (1/18/2014 3:09:00 AM)

    an outstanding poem to remind each one of his/her mother and how she will always be missed. (Report) Reply

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