kanav justa

Veteran Poet - 1,063 Points (Shimla)

A Shitty Poem Poem by kanav justa

Some things makes us wise and Some things makes us bad
Sometimes you just wish, you should have listened to your dad
Sometimes you wonder of the things that you have with you
sometimes you just throw them, and bring yourself all new
Sometimes struck in chaos, when your thought seems to shutdown
Thinking of some shit, sometimes black sometimes brown
Why this fkuk has to happen always with me
Like some tire I roll, where dogs come and they pee
Why is that when I sit down to write some serious stuff
I know It aint that easy but it aint that tough
I have tried it in the morning and I have tried it in the night
But why there has to be some shit in whatever I write
Cant I find some good words, some words you might like
To find them I go to some fine place with my driver and my bike
Many songs I have heard and many songs I have sung
But when I sit and write, I see only cow dung
On a fresh morning, looking for something that could inspire
I end up seeing some fresh shit, some fresh shit on some fire

Submitted: Thursday, November 29, 2012

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  • Rookie - 118 Points Yash Shinde (4/1/2014 10:20:00 AM)

    lol, kanav you can work so good on such humourous pieces as well! ......loved this one... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,881 Points * Sunprincess * (1/15/2014 8:19:00 PM)

    ....kanav...I know SOMETHING you probably don't know...no I am sure you don't know....I know a SECRET and you don't know it... hahaha.....but I am willing to SHARE with you...cause you are my FAVORITE POET! ! ! .... you know I haven't read another poem like this one and I have read *3652 poems on this site...you penned an AWESOME poem which is so UNIQUE, ...and it's UNIQUENESS makes it one of ph's TOP TEN POEMS FROM MEMBERS....I am not including famous poets...this poem is one of your very BEST...it makes me feel HAPPY inside.... cause you so BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED your FEELINGS...and this is exactly how I feel when I wish to write a poem and the words will not come to me....this is a lesson I have learned since beginning to write.... is to write what I am most PASSIONATE about...these PASSIONS are the easiest and they write themselves...and yes, most of my poems are written quickly...but I can spend extra time editing: p...you know I can't wait until YOU have THREE or FOUR HUNDRED poems on this site or even MORE...I will be so HAPPY to read each and every one of them :) and definitely I will read them MORE THAN ONCE; p....cause there is something SPECIAL about your poems....and I have no idea what that something is :)
    .........................but I wish to tell you I LOVE THIS POEM! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 379 Points Marie Shine (12/1/2013 12:06:00 PM)

    Awwwww! I adore your delightful sense of humour which shines resplendently though out this finely crafted poem, which is anything but a 'shitty' poem, in fact it is a wonderful creation from your poetic pen, Kanav. I must ask you what 'fkuk' means, as I wondered if you meant 'flux'? Your lines really tickled my sense of humour and the poem is very cleverly penned. In rhyming couplets, it shows the frustration which penning a poem can be for a writer sometimes. The flow is smooth and effortless! I can't stop laughing. EVERYBODY should be forced to read this delightful poem, especially those who are feeling down, because they would only just have begun to read it, when they would soon forget about themselves and enjoy a much needed laugh, until they could laugh no more. Thank you for sharing, Kanav! Excellent crafting. Blessings... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 423 Points Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (11/17/2013 3:10:00 AM)

    Now that is a lot of shit to write
    And keep every thing in rhyme
    But take my word- it is good one too
    As a poem, it does not belong to the loo.......

    A very good piece of work. Inspiration from cow dung! why not? ? Keep on at it and I welcome you to my page too.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,881 Points * Sunprincess * (11/2/2013 8:16:00 PM)

    laughing out loud...we all know you can write...this poem cracks me up: p (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,950 Points Bri Edwards (12/18/2012 6:02:00 PM)

    i have come to read this poet as he sent me a comment. i read a short one and didn't like it much (actually i didn't understand it.......about sun and shadow, etc.) BUT THIS ONE i love....well maybe not love totally, but quite a bit. i'll have to read it again, but for now i'll add it to my mypoemlist..before i forget. and, what the hell, i'll add kanav to my mypoetlist, in hopes it will get me back for more some day and i can see if he gets more or less shitty in the future. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stevie Taite (12/11/2012 6:56:00 AM)

    Oh you sound so moody and grumpy! I guess that's the point! Don't moan about writing shite! Even if a bit twisted it still reads as a poopy delight! Hehehe! You have talent, search out some Wow words(go read my five year olds lesson in poetry!) Do a bit if research in stuff you are interested in, and keep creating! They are your babies, nurture them! (Fetal and folded, cryptic lipstick, catch a poem, prolific poets pen...) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Wabi Sabi (12/9/2012 9:44:00 PM)

    your poems tell the truth. and shit is one of the important part of our life, literally. I like your shit because you are a fact teller, not being afraid of becoming one here. I like people like you are. thanks for this poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (12/9/2012 4:09:00 AM)

    A perfect juxtaposition between humour and pain.... i think all who write or paint suffer the doubts terribly and get the collywobbles (love that word lol) but we get them and doubt our worth....i think the best thing to do sometimes is just walk away for a few hours days even weeks and return with a fresh head and often you realise you were just burnt out or comparing too much...tyvm karen (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,521 Points Neela Nath (11/29/2012 10:20:00 AM)

    No Kavita is right. This poem is very nice. I loved the rhythm. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie A B (11/29/2012 4:39:00 AM)

    but ur poem isnt a shit, , , , its a gud write :) (Report) Reply

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