A Seamless Life Line Poem by Dave Alan Walker

A Seamless Life Line

Rating: 4.9


A never ending story
of events
That fall into line
like soldiers on parade

From one event to the next
It's like it was a plan
just to get you to now

From the obscure
to the sublime
everything in life
falls into one
seamless life line

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 14 February 2012

destiny, or fate... the path we follow! great poem!

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Juan Olivarez 15 February 2012

Absolutely true, great words.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 15 February 2012

love poem, i like this, like it is planned.

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John Carse 16 February 2012

How did we get to 'now'. Sometimes it feels impossible that life has passed us by so effortlessly. Well written and illuminating. Thank you for your kind comment on one of my poems.

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Renu Kakkar 17 February 2012

very true...life is events one following another

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Roseann Shawiak 10 October 2013

So much truth in so little words. Really like this poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Geetha Jayakumar 31 July 2013

Lovely poem..Good message...Great write..

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Babatunde Aremu 11 April 2012

Great poem with great moral lesson about life

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(De Va) 22 February 2012

words fall into line as you write from your soul..blessings

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Cristina Teodor 18 February 2012

Path of life, a line that never ends, events that succeed following a pattern, penned so lovely by you..Cristina Teodor

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