A Perfect Story Poem by SALINI NAIR

A Perfect Story

Rating: 3.5


Pretty way of comparison
All is not complete any way
Nothing is perfect in all way
It sighs for some moments
But the time will change its way
Pretty narrow way to perfectionism
Abandoned outcome that section the risk
Step to change and rest is hidden
Time is the leader, and self is the rival
It projects to you as you are the sinner


©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Wednesday, February 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 18 December 2014

I think time too is an imperfect computer program in which there is no undo command.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 18 November 2014

Rightly said time is the leader and self is the rival......one tries to be perfect but rarely achieves always.......very nicely composed

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Salini Nair 13 April 2014

perfection is not possible always...

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Poet's Fan 12 February 2014

a perfect story of TIME that leads, , , and the philosophy of 'eternal imperfection' is timeless, , after all we are human.. thanx for such a nice thought..

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