Poet of the River

Rookie - 10 Points (july 27 1994 / California, but move around a lot.)

A Part Of Me(Thought)


You are on the outside looking in,
You never frown,
You never grin.
When you are down,
You never let anyone in.
You never say a thing,
You never make a sound.
You have no possessions, no ring.
I listen to your heart, yet I don't here anything..
You come and go like the mist.
There for a moment, then blown away.
I wish you would come home with me.
when you come, have the heart to stay.
never leave me alone.
And never go away.

Submitted: Friday, December 23, 2011
Edited: Saturday, May 19, 2012

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Comments about this poem (A Part Of Me(Thought) by Poet of the River )

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (6/5/2013 1:31:00 PM)

    A good read. We are a part of the whole. meaning we are part of each other. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Daniel Warner (3/8/2012 12:38:00 PM)

    I think that 'Cosmic Dreamer' understated that comment; this poem is a wonder to a lone soul. Someone out there will take this as motivation. If you can read some of my poems and you'll see what I mean. -Warner (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Cosmic Dreamer (12/26/2011 3:05:00 PM)

    I think we are all part of each other making up a wonderful whole... Nice poem... (Report) Reply

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