Poet of the River

Rookie - 10 Points (july 27 1994 / California, but move around a lot.)

A Part Of Me(Thought) - Poem by Poet of the River

You are on the outside looking in,
You never frown,
You never grin.
When you are down,
You never let anyone in.
You never say a thing,
You never make a sound.
You have no possessions, no ring.
I listen to your heart, yet I don't here anything..
You come and go like the mist.
There for a moment, then blown away.
I wish you would come home with me.
when you come, have the heart to stay.
never leave me alone.
And never go away.


Comments about A Part Of Me(Thought) by Poet of the River

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (6/5/2013 1:31:00 PM)

    A good read. We are a part of the whole. meaning we are part of each other. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 27 Points Daniel Warner (3/8/2012 12:38:00 PM)

    I think that 'Cosmic Dreamer' understated that comment; this poem is a wonder to a lone soul. Someone out there will take this as motivation. If you can read some of my poems and you'll see what I mean. -Warner (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - -1 Points Cosmic Dreamer (12/26/2011 3:05:00 PM)

    I think we are all part of each other making up a wonderful whole... Nice poem... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 23, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 19, 2012


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