A New Meaning Poem by Nikunj Sharma

A New Meaning

Rating: 4.7


What a poem should be?
Hand picked words, precisely lined up
As if in an act of peace
To reflect, introspectively

And to discover a new meaning.

Passions conceive the poem
On the bed filled with verbiage
Enchant the fibres of heart
Melodious to the ears; where it

Stimulates the senses
Hedonistic with in itself, each line
Oscillates beyond the obvious;
Undoes the woeful knots
Liberates the jaded mind
Dances on its musical measure

Braces up for a new pair of eyes
Eager to allow another's mind to listen.

An acorstic, What - a - poem - should - be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mubeen Sadhika 17 September 2009

Good description about a poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Catrina Heart 18 September 2009

True and well said.....what is the art of poetry all about.10++++ Thanks we have Ronald Peat, Carl Harris, Indian poets etc. who are very visible in extending their knowledge to help those like me in writing poetry. From them and great friends here in PH our ideas are widdening, moving better into the world of art.

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Deepti Agarwal 18 September 2009

:) ...... a question which every person ask.... nicely said... :)

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 18 September 2009

each line should oscillate beyond the obvious.....very well written...10

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Rehana Nazli 19 September 2009

Stimulates the senses Hedonistic with in itself, each line Oscillates beyond the obvious; Undoes the woeful knots Liberates the jaded mind Dances on its musical measure It seems a beautiful response to someone who told you how to write a poem.... beautiful poem.

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JKL 9 23 May 2018

loved this, it sounds good and is well written,9/10

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Marilyn Lott 21 November 2009

With your love of words you can write anything. As young as you are you have many years in which to do so! '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Sally Plumb Plumb 09 November 2009

I have read this again... enjoyable.

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Raven Bishop 25 October 2009

Definitely what a poem should be. 10.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 24 October 2009

A poem is release of emotion, angry or peaceful.

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