Treasure Island

Rachel Nichols


A Million Kisses for YOUUU


the moon rises so very high
with dreams flying away
like a kiss blown in the wind
on a warm summer night

and its so very easy
to see stars twinkling
as sweet dreams vanish
with early morning light

i have only one lifetime…
only one life to share with you
if anywhere i could be
i would choose to be with you

if a million wishes i have
i would give them all to you
and if a million kisses i have
i would save them all for you

Submitted: Wednesday, February 05, 2014

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  • Khairul Ahsan (6/24/2014 11:40:00 PM)

    Loved this lovely poem. It's so sweet and passionate!
    The last stanza is the sweetest of all!
    I wonder how many years it would take for your guy to receive and respond to your 'million kisses'! (Report) Reply

  • Mazhari David (5/21/2014 3:16:00 AM)

    Only one lifetime, dear Rachel... but fear and walls all around... walls made of words... silly locked in human beings* *... (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Brick (5/18/2014 11:30:00 PM)

    Your poem expresses the wonderful hyperbole of human love. Do you know the term HYPERBOLE? It's another word for exaggeration, but specifically the literary use of exaggeration for effect. This means the writer is targeting it,
    and not just gushing. Within the structure of your line stanzas you used the right amount of - hyperbole to prove the point of runaway desire. (That's the former English teacher in me - but I was ALWAYS excited to learn about literary techniques and then use them in my writing. You too!) (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (4/5/2014 8:19:00 AM)

    Some people say life is a dream. I don't know whether life is a dream or not. I know what, life with out dreams becomes difficult. Good sentiments and a good poem as well. (Report) Reply

  • Mr. Nobody (3/26/2014 10:55:00 PM)

    Dreams come and dreams go... and then they come again! ! Whew-hoo! ! ! PTL! (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Feldman (3/26/2014 7:55:00 PM)

    Lovingly romantic.
    I see you have the power to make millionaires without having to gamble.
    Good show! (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan (6/24/2014 11:27:00 PM)

    Loved your comment, Sandra!

  • Ramesh Rai (3/23/2014 10:01:00 AM)

    I have only one lifeline saved to reach the goal of life and that is love for which billions of kisses are least. Enjoyed your write. Thank you for sharing. Regards. (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (2/17/2014 3:33:00 AM)

    Hey Rachel - you won my heart, such a maddening eagerness for your lover hints how much you are longing.
    ...... just BEAUTIFULLLLLLLL.
    You may read my new poem I miss that gift. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (2/8/2014 5:57:00 AM)

    When a million kisses fall on the same face... the poor guy will be suffocated.... so kiss him sparingly....! ! After all you are Sunprincess.... so the kisses can be unusually warm and can even burn him! (joking! !) (Report) Reply

    Khairul Ahsan (6/24/2014 11:28:00 PM)

    How wonderfully you said so, Valsa!

  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (2/7/2014 3:34:00 AM)

    if a million wishes i have
    i would give them all to you

    This is the beauty of love...Love never hurts and it knows only to love... (Report) Reply

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