Members Who Read Most Number Of Poems

Live Scores

Click here to see the rest of the list

What do you think this poem is about?

For Example: love, art, fashion, friendship and etc.

A Mermaid's Fantasy

a beautiful mermaid was lost in a silken fantasy of love
she played and swam in the ocean blue
she loved to float and flap her tail creating a big splash
floating farther and farther away from land
she dreamed of the prince who lives in a bejeweled castle
a most gorgeous prince who is in love with a princess
she is the princess of the sun who is most beautiful
to her dolphin friends the mermaid confessed
we are from two different worlds he and I, she cried
but still I am in love with him, only him
and she went splash, splash with her tail and swam away
exuberantly I will swim past the coral reef, she thought
I just wish to catch a glimpse of the prince, he is so fine
and he was there walking on the shore
the mermaid called, come with me love forevermore
yet the prince called to her and says no never can I
for I am in love with the princess of the sun
she is the one, she is the only one and my love is true!

Submitted: Tuesday, January 21, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, January 22, 2014

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (A Starry Starry Night by Rachel Nichols )

Enter the verification code :

  • John Westlake (3/23/2014 4:50:00 PM)

    So very beautiful. A love story you just wish it could have a happy ending. At least a 9.

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Meena Mustafa (2/27/2014 11:37:00 PM)

    A beautiful love story :)

  • Geetha Jayakumar (1/28/2014 9:11:00 AM)

    Fantastic poem presented passionately. Like Valsa had said, it too carried me to a seashore and the Mermaid!
    Loved reading it.

  • Valsa George (1/26/2014 12:50:00 AM)

    A very lucid description.... a beautiful web of romance spun...! Enjoyed the poem and specifically the line
    ........ she went splash, splash with her tail and swam away

    It has carried me to a seashore and the Mermaid!

  • Yasmeen Khan (1/24/2014 9:45:00 AM)

    It's fantastical and a passionate love poem.

  • Hans Vr (1/23/2014 11:43:00 PM)

    Lovely story.
    Love the strength of the prince's love

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (1/22/2014 6:17:00 AM)

    A love triangle beautifully presented. Sun prince is dedicated in his love.

  • Amitava Sur (1/22/2014 5:09:00 AM)

    A simple sweet love story with a pleasure to read. Reminds me of the of the sweet feeling in my childhood after reading a fairy tail..... very nice

  • Kanav Justa (1/21/2014 10:31:00 PM)

    this one is lovely too, , , its hard to say, , whic poem is morre beautiful, , this one or the previous, , good job, , ,

Read all 9 comments »
[Hata Bildir]