A Message To My Sister Poem by Mary Nagy

A Message To My Sister



When we talked yesterday
your pain was so apparent
even though
you wouldn't say.

I could feel you
through my computer.
I could feel your pain
and your desire
for happiness.

I have faith in you
and if I could send my strength
acrossed the many miles
to help guide you
through the roads
that are bound to get rough
I would.

Prove everyone wrong
show them
that you have suffered
long enough
and that now
you will accept nothing
less than happiness.

We were born into pain
loneliness
and abuse.
Don't stay there.
You are so young still
and what a survivors story
you will have
when you overcome
all your obstacles
and create the life
you've never dared to dream!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seán O' Muiriosa 17 January 2006

Truely touching Mary. How lucky she is to have you as a sister. Amazing emotion here that couldn't have been written in a better fashion. All the best, Seán

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Uriah Hamilton 17 January 2006

I think this is a message to anyone and everyone who needs to make their life better from the inside out, I knoe I'm there, I wish your sister luck.

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Ernestine Northover 18 January 2006

A real deep one here from you Mary, so touching and emotional. Super! Love Ernestine XXX

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Joy Vanderhelm 19 January 2006

What touching and heart-warming therapy, Mary. I think I might use some of it. God knows, some of us need a little push every now and then. A great sentimental poem.

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Slimboydim . 17 January 2006

Positive message, heart felt words. A few elements made difficult reading (for me) With your support, she can find peace. Your poems help, Thank you for sharing. Wonderful piece. Kindest Regards Slim. x.

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Coreena Dejesus 18 July 2009

Very touching! I can feel the emotion pour in this one. Thank you for sharing. Hugs CC

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Jim Foulk 12 February 2007

a heart felt piece of beautiful writen poetry. lots of love in this one, what love you must have for your sweet sister, very touching.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 24 January 2006

Excellent, Mary and I am sure it will be well received. Best H

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Setareh Ghanooni 22 January 2006

true true comes right from your soul and many others' souls like me. I guess poems like this stick in minds.

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Duncan Wyllie 21 January 2006

Thankyou, this one really moved me. Lifes twists and turns and winding roads and no clear map sometimes either.It maybe that with all our knowledge that we sometimes just stumble upon the straight roads.So leave the highway open drive slowly and watch for the signs that come into view through the mist on there own! All The Very Best Love Duncan

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