(00) The Place I Search For Poem by Mary Nagy

(00) The Place I Search For

Rating: 2.7


To look
at your life
and not feel
you need.

To feel
complete.
Whole.
Content.

To have
reached
a place
where life
is enough.

To just
breathe
and be
thankful for the air.

That
is the place
I'm searching for.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alice Vedral Rivera 12 May 2006

Aren't we all searching for that place - I like this. It's different from your usual style. avr

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Sweetie Sarah<3 12 May 2006

Beautiful. I really makes you think about what you were thinking. You know? Nice work Mary! Sweetie Sarah

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Ray Lucero 12 May 2006

Mary, If you can speak beautifully about 'that place', you know how to get there, because after all it's just a state of mind...right? You've got vision and soul...I enjoy your writing. Ray

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Dee Daffodil 12 May 2006

Mary, Aren't we all really looking for that in life. Let us know if you find it. Hugs, Dee

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Esther Leclerc 26 May 2006

Been there lots of times but can't seem to stay in that one place... Again, a perfect poem of simplicity which, of itself, is so beautiful. : ]

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Deam William Johnston 18 February 2018

Good poems. Keep up the work

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Roseann Shawiak 16 October 2013

Great poem, short and simple about what you're searching for in life. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Andrew Blakemore 22 October 2008

A lovely poem of longing, your words are so beautiful. Best wishes, Andrew

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I think we are all searching. A nicely written, spare poem.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 November 2007

yet unique repose in desire as poised by the glaze of mind, well penned, thanks for sharing

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