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Suraj Samtani

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A Mathematical Relationship


I now realise the value of time.
In less than a quarter, our distances have been multiplied.
Our communication has been divided.

In the moments to come, I hope to add more special memories,
And subtract the obstacles of our relationship.

May the intensity of our love be inversely proportional to every wave that falls in the Niagara.

May our Love for each other expand into the universe, and
May it be then integrated with the Higher Source
Until time reaches infinity, and beyond.

Submitted: Sunday, September 02, 2007
Edited: Monday, September 05, 2011

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  • Gold Star - 15,891 Points Akhtar Jawad (9/19/2014 10:48:00 PM)

    May the intensity of our love be inversely proportional to every wave that falls in the Niagara.

    If intensity of love varies inversely according to waves, the product of intensity and wave will remain constant, i.e., if the waves will be on lower side the love will be on higher side. If so poet means the waves that affect love and friendship should decrease so that love may increase. A nice idea, i liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,353 Points Kay Staley (9/19/2014 11:44:00 AM)

    It doesnt really sound like a poem because of 0% rhyme scheme. Just a friendly hint: It would look better if you changed the format on this sight...you dont have to change what you wrote, just hit enter more often and it would look more orderly. The first two paragraphs go along nicely with the name and idea, but the last two arent very good. The references in them are so off the wall and its hard to understand why they are there. If it was longer with more paragraphs like the first two, and had at least a semblance of the rhyme scheme, it would be much better. On the positive side, it is a good idea and has appeal for its unique (mathematical) view. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,238 Points Roseann Shawiak (1/26/2014 5:37:00 AM)

    Loved your use of mathematics in this poem. Life revolves around equations and
    formulas in math, you expressed it well in this poem. I've written several poems
    using properties of math, if you'd like you may read and comment on them. I'd be
    interested in your thoughts of them. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 606 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (9/20/2012 12:02:00 AM)

    Quite an interesting poem, well done...quite well measured, I must say, even the proportions of intensity of love vs waves of Niagara... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Hunter Hunters (9/19/2012 5:44:00 AM)

    Hey, i can see the mathematics in you, the angles you used in the construction of words is clear, weldone. If u don't mine take a few minute of ur time and bisect my angle of poems(festus, the fluke, faith ect...) for me. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,113 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (9/19/2012 2:16:00 AM)

    Fantastic idea of calculating abstract. Yes, mathematics can't reach the extreme, but it could put a valid proximity of attending what we should know by conscious....Nice experience of reading. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 606 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (4/12/2009 10:36:00 AM)

    Love and Maths do not always go together, but you have put it all so beautifully in a poem. Well done! Keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Subroto Chatterjee (4/9/2009 10:58:00 PM)

    Hey,
    You are still studying, huh? College? Specialization? Math? Science?
    Anyways, you got all your equations and relations figured out.
    Very imaginative. Keep it up!

    Cheers.
    Subroto. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Olugbenga Ayoola (4/4/2009 1:27:00 PM)

    i really like the away you organise your peomwith mathematic words God will renew your strenght in writing, you will get to your destination.in life (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Don Mcwilliams (3/7/2008 8:39:00 AM)

    Suraj,

    What a delightfully unique paean to love. Perhaps everything in the universe can, indeed, be expalined mathematically. You have convinced me.

    Regards,
    Don (Report) Reply

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