Bellaina Bella Hernandez

Rookie (4-17-1994 / California)

A Lost Chance


Why cant i tell you what i feel for you?
Am i that scared to know what you think of me?

Been hurt too many times
that made me give up on love
but this love i have for you
i know is a love thats true
might tell you real soon...
probably not tell you or anyone at all
not wanting to be persecuted
or to be judged
or to be told 'your not good enough'
not wanting to be rejected again
to hurt my heart further more

Now i look at you everday
as you look my way
i notice your new love affair
an overwhelming feeling of jealousy and hate
to all the girls around you but mainly her
i feel your intense stare upon me
a stare i know which is full of love
but i look away
and i finally relized
i allowed my feeeling to hurt me more
i lost my only chance
of someone i could love
could love me back
i lost a chance of life with love
i lost a chance of romance

11-3-2011

Submitted: Thursday, November 03, 2011

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  • Freshman - 1,032 Points Tiku . (7/26/2014 7:20:00 AM)

    very nice.emotionally strong ink.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,676 Points Amitava Sur (7/26/2014 6:25:00 AM)

    A touching poem with an expression of a broken heart.... very nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,544 Points Lyn Paul (7/26/2013 6:49:00 PM)

    Lovely words Bellaina. Being that there is no love and the truth is out is better for. This allows you to know this person is not the one. Yet know, there is some special person just waiting for you. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,544 Points Lyn Paul (7/26/2013 6:49:00 PM)

    Lovely words Bellaina. Being that there is no love and the truth is out is better for. This allows you to know this person is not the one. Yet know, there is some special person just waiting for you. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Khushbeen Kaur (7/26/2013 12:26:00 PM)

    The poem is a true reflection of feelings of many :) ...Inspired me for my next poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Khushbeen Kaur (7/26/2013 12:25:00 PM)

    The poem is a true reflection of feelings of many :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Larry Hussey (7/28/2012 1:34:00 PM)

    This is a truly universal feeling. This is what poetry is for. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 855 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (7/27/2012 12:09:00 AM)

    Take heart, girl...there will be many more chances in future, all yours to grab...don't regret too much...that's the secret of life... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,685 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (7/26/2012 11:42:00 PM)

    i allowed my feeeling to hurt me more. The poem is too sad and out from a heart that is hurt. Let the time heals the wound! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Issam Hal (7/26/2012 5:30:00 PM)

    Very lovely poem about love
    it make me say girls are always looking for love whatever they are
    tnx for this pure heart (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,150 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/26/2012 4:04:00 PM)

    Secrets kept now in the dark
    That never see the light of day
    Remember this tho may be stark
    His secrets for you he keeps at bay (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Saucy Elmo (1/5/2012 5:52:00 PM)

    This kind of reminded me of me and my most recent ex. Beautiful poem :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hope Anderson (12/14/2011 5:02:00 PM)

    i really love this poem its great: +) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (11/3/2011 8:05:00 PM)

    Outburst of your broken heart clearly leaving its traces behind! A very heart touching and well penned poem that evokes pain and suffering but also shows firmly your great desire to take a new path toward the horizon! Brava! 10+++ I can relate to this thought provoking write 100% and this can be seen in most of my poems including my most recent titled: A Love's Confession which I hope you can read whenever time permits! Obviously, young lady, Poetry runs in your blood! Keep inspiring the World with more of your amazing writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC... (Report) Reply

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