Is It Poetry

Gold Star - 9,093 Points (1958 - / Bus-Boys And Poets, Washington D.C.)

A 'Girl' And Now - Poem by Is It Poetry

Lost Girl and Now in the woods,
and that which you hug is the tree.
You can not stretch them, Full around it,
while upward and down ward amazed.
And your feet become even more entangled
under it's skirt,
as it's roots are at play with your lovely toes.


Comments about A 'Girl' And Now by Is It Poetry

  • Gold Star - 10,190 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/11/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    stimulating to think.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Halana Williams (12/9/2009 1:17:00 PM) the meaning of your poem is?
    i mean dont get me wrong your words were nice but i just couldn't see your vision. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,154 Points Seema Chowdhury (12/9/2009 7:17:00 AM)

    very nice and meaningful poem. thanks for sharing your poem.
    take care (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sherri Coulter (12/8/2009 8:09:00 PM)

    lovely play from your lips, iip, as I usually read -10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tai Chi Italy (12/7/2009 5:16:00 PM)

    Sleepy Hollow springs to mind here iip! The final lines imagery is a bit scarey, but comforting too.

    Smiling at you

    Tai (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maria Shipka (12/4/2009 6:17:00 AM)

    Yes! It is not about what you write!
    It is not about what I read...
    it is about what is evokate in my mind :)
    Thank you for sharing! + 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 190 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (12/3/2009 1:54:00 AM)

    guy------- you write well. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 173 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (12/2/2009 2:17:00 PM)

    Wonderful metaphor….’ it's roots play with your long toes….’ Wow!
    UK (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 28, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 19, 2011

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