A Crazy Notion Poem by Susy Evelyne

A Crazy Notion

Rating: 5.0


Something strange is going on
at the age of forty-three:

I'm driving a Mercedes
in California, by the sea

With the wind on my face
and my hair blowing free

And George Benson on the system,
serenading me!

Don't ask me to explain to you
why ever this should be -

It's just a crazy notion
at the age of forty-three.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A mid-life day-dream!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 24 November 2013

oh, oh, love this poem...hair blowing free...and your mind!

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John Brown 26 November 2013

As Noddy Holder once said, Hey mama we're all crazy now. Nice poem Susy.

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Stephen Katona 18 June 2014

This is yet another of your poems where it's so easy to imagine being part of the journey you're describing. The great thing is I can read this poem and think I'm by the sea in California in a sports car, without having to pay for a plane ticket or have any fear of crashing my car.

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Chuy Amante 07 May 2014

Hurry up and arrive and into my car dive the coast we will drive Absolutely ALIVE! I loved it! It may not be all it's cracked up to be, or maybe it is more, let's see!

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Shania K. Younce 17 April 2014

I love the rhythmic flow of the poem. It is fun to say over and over. Bien!

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Gajanan Mishra 28 November 2013

I like it, thanks Susy,

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Lucifera Santez 26 November 2013

wonderful. loved it. please read some of my poems and comment. :)

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