Dom Hunt

Rookie - 13 Points (17/04/1966 / geelong)

A Bigger Wall - Poem by Dom Hunt

It comes in waves
Sometimes big sometimes small
Endlessly  they pile up
Bang against me till I fall
I try to stand but fail
On hand and knees I crawl
Trying not to drown in it
Even my breathing starts to stall
My heart beats a weary way
I cry to god to hear my call
Thinking I can't go another day
Strength I need to stand tall
My faith will help me build
Against this grief a bigger wall
 


Comments about A Bigger Wall by Dom Hunt

  • Rookie - 421 Points Shania K. Younce (3/18/2014 10:19:00 PM)

    A really lovely write. Bien! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 113 Points Greg Davidson (12/9/2012 12:44:00 AM)

    I love the image you create for me - wave after wave - very effective (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Barb Mcavaney (8/6/2012 3:35:00 PM)

    You hit the wall with a bang. You will stand up again. Written with feeling and deept meaning (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 1, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 1, 2012


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