#2 Poem by Karina Castle

2/11/2008 Remember when he loved me I was his world Wanted to be with me always We danced and we twirled again love the words in places - you have a good way of showing how you feel take care

Through these exasperating words a whole world of anguish flows from a dreamy past of a beautiful soul in love but lamenting the lover's switch over. The poem will be remembered for its immaculate beauty. Thanks. A quote: I feel like his foot rest / I love him so much / But right now I want to cut

An expression of deep emotional feeling thirsting for more love. Nice write! kudos

Great write! Very familiar feeling. Keep it up

some do it to themselves instead of to others

Dump the loser!

Love and pain! Very common among mankind. Nice work.

So many different forms of love - and such depth portrayed here... Aging we find better ways to cope with all the cracks and fissures in love - because it is something we do all of our lives.... Cutting oneself is never the answer - because the real guy - the one you meet later - the one who loves you - and who is right now looking for you - deserves the whole you - unfettered - unmarred - Look at your poetry! How wonderful this is! You have so much more value than what this subject of your poem offers back to you.... I hope you meant just 'cut' him out of your life...

You really express yourself well, Karina. Thanks for sharing. Congrats on being poet of the day.