1961, And Later (Haiku) Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

1961, And Later (Haiku)

Rating: 2.8


Cherryblossomfresh
this word describes your bosom.
My eyes were grateful.

Acorns suspended
forty years of gravity,
I'm presbyopic.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeremiah Shine 19 January 2006

my first instinct was...he still loves her! then i began to wonder...is it a physical condition of the speaker or a description of the loss of desire? could go either way like a greek theatre mask!

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Mary Nagy 19 January 2006

This made me laugh Herbert. I can't decide if this is ''sweet'' or ''corny''.......maybe just enough of both to be a wonderful poem! Sincerely, Mary

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 19 January 2006

~giggle~ I had a good laugh, thanks for making my morning :)

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Herbert Nehrlich1 01 August 2007

Hey there, Ravinder you've been inside the sewers too long. You smell now. It was not I who, through haikus made you sick, sir it is your liver. You need curcumin blown into the rear passage you may look better.

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Ravinder Malhotra 29 July 2007

I read today some Haiku By Herbert Nehrlich It hardly gave me pleasure But rather left me sick Haiku is like raw meat Served and called cuisine Not for people with some sense Relished by the insane

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K K 06 March 2007

~snicker~ Funny write :) KK

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Linda Hepner 28 January 2006

Nice to open my computer and read this! Lucky man to see such blossoming bosoms! Linda

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Raynette Eitel 19 January 2006

Oh dear, should we call a doctor? :) Funny poem, Herbert! Raynette

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