hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 67,038 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

14th January - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

! 4th January is called here as Uttrayan
Tilting of Sun from South to Uttar (North)
The position of sun will alter
The days from now onwards will be longer

Sky will be full of kites
The slogans will be chanted with full religious rites
Whole population will be on roof top
The kites will be flying non stop

Billions of rupees will be spent on kites
Many birds will loose their lives
The loss of human lives too from free fall
Religious fever with all advices to receive unheeded call

It has witnessed age long tradition
Old or young take part without any reservation
Festival of great fervor with message and joy
Open for all irrespective of anything to participate and enjoy

Not in many parts but in some of the Indian parts it is known
The Chinese are believed to be originator with tradition to own
The favorable wind bring competition to the climax
Complete holiday to spend the day with joy and relax

The climate change is linked with the festival
The spring also coincides with its arrival
The winter may be losing its grip from here on
The hard climate may soon be forgotten or gone


Comments about 14th January by hasmukh amathalal

  • Freshman - 865 Points Jitesh Shah (3/13/2014 11:00:00 PM)

    nice poem for festival of uttarayance and i invite to read my poem i have improve it and give me a suggetion (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Ian Pourchot (4/16/2011 3:49:00 PM)

    Very nice! great to read a work such as this especially being a pianist myself (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 15, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 12, 2011


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