10 Kittens Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

10 Kittens

Rating: 4.5


Ten kittens in my home now
Ten little brats
Their mothers never knew how
To catch the cupboard rats!
Their mothers never knew how
To go for hunt and prey
How the kittens would learn now
Anything other than play!
Their mothers never knew how
To pounce on a mouse
The poor kittens are all now
Just idling in my house!
Their mothers never knew how
To make their own food
Why still the lazy kittens now
Making me feel so good?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Brown 12 June 2013

I like this puts me in mind of my kids and grandkids, great joy, although maybe that's not what you intended

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Indira Babbellapati 15 June 2013

Hey, how wonderful. Speaks volumes on lessons in living!

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Juan Olivarez 06 July 2013

Lovely. Great poem. I completely understand.

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Somanathan Iyer 23 July 2013

The kittens are fortunate to get such a caretaker. May be when everything is available without efforts, they tend to forget their natural talents like hunting etc, . A nice poem.

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Sj Holland 27 July 2013

I enjoyed this light, humorous verse. Nice how you shared your feelings about the fact that you just can't help but love these little lazy kittens, who are just like their mom. Very good write about human nature.

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Kittens which makes some disturbance in house but makes such happiness in their plays. A poem written in perfect animal love and it is great.

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Shania K. Younce 16 March 2014

A well written write. Bien!

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V P Mahur 13 March 2014

Dear Sir, this poem gives a glimpse of love for animals. Nicely written. Thanks!

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Noreen Carden 28 October 2013

Hello Pradip lovely poems i have had a few of those lazy kittens myself well done enjoyed reading

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'' Stiltskin 29 August 2013

I feel a little like this about my family.............! ! Nice write, I love my cat for not needing me yet still still choosing to share our home and affection...... :)

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