[03] Black Angel Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

interesting poem, . different approach nice though.. sir try bit, not bite.

Wow! It is really an interesting poem sir.I love you black angel

clever write!

Very good my dear friend.

A Piece of thin ribbon Scorching sunlight Entered as a snake Through the window And bite my leg A dagger is pushed Into the skin—I wake up....bravo, bravo.... I love that dark angel too, which you said in this master piece and I think it's the rainy clouds, I might be wrong but anyways I love the way of your writing style, Sarkar which makes reader think of multiple feelings....thanks many 10'ssssss rgds asif

Beware of the world...Black Angels abound in dreams, n, life wake up call in this poem indeed, excellent imagey +++++10 regards

Piece of thin ribbon Scorching sunlight Entered as a snake Through the window And bite my leg A dagger is pushed Into the skin—I wake up... evils in form come and bite us. we experience it daily in our dreams, , , beautiful write and deseves 10

i loved this poem..is is true snake as snakes can be in many shapes and this poem fit what is happening these days..did i tell you about ho cheat in rating..it seems some one dcrease your rating..that one of the true snakes too as some they put 10++on the page but in the box less than that once one cute gut put for me 3..cheers...beautiful meaningful poem

Excellent imagery Ashraful....10+++

Your words draw the reader into your world that you are creating.