Gateway Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Gateway

Rating: 3.8


Tongue to vanish earnings
Eye to store memory
Money to craft demand
Friend to spend emotion

Birth to hug death
Livings to fertilize soil
Love to enter sorrow
Life to find the zero

Gateway is calling us
Let us go to the zero

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Herbert Nehrlich2 01 June 2009

Yes, clever and covert but full of meaning to be interpreted by the reader. H

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Life to find the zero Gateway is calling us Let us go to the zero cogito sum ergo

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Ken E Hall 01 June 2009

Your poem is the clock of life ticking away to zero, interesting and thoughtful poem regards

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John Tiong Chunghoo 01 June 2009

i love this one ashraful.

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Ramesh T A 03 June 2009

End is gateway to zero for all is true!

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Alf Hutchison 08 June 2009

mystifying totally mystifying...Alf

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Sathyanarayana M V S 06 June 2009

Highly philosophical. So true too. Beautifully crafted. Wonderful style.

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Marieta Maglas 06 June 2009

''Livings to fertilize soil Love to enter sorrow Life to find the zero'' You say that life is for the matter and spirit is eternal and the spirit is sad when the body dies, because of love.Love is eternal and the spirits are together, after death. The separation of spirits who love each other are causing sorrow and pain .wonderful poem 10++

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Reshma Ramesh 06 June 2009

something to ponder about............

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Estrella Baldemosa 06 June 2009

Love to enter sorrow... Life to find the zero... so true...10

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