Elaine Macfarlane

Elaine Macfarlane Poems

The shock of diagnosis
was etched upon her face
Her eyes and mouth wide open
slow motion, now the pace
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Some days I feel I'm drowning
sinking way down low.
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3.

I’m sending you an angel
I hope you’ll keep her near
She’ll help you through your sadness
She’ll help you through your fear
...

Standing on the sidelines,
watching helplessly as the shining light
within you fades.
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The Best Poem Of Elaine Macfarlane

Cancer Diagnosis

The shock of diagnosis
was etched upon her face
Her eyes and mouth wide open
slow motion, now the pace
“I’m sorry, ” said the doctor
was ringing in her ears
Her nightmares had come true
her deepest darkest fears.

As she slowly left his office
with a cloud above her head
She struggled to remember
everything he’d said
she really can’t remember
how she made it home that day
but somehow she got there
somehow she found her way.

Her heart was thumping loudly
as she made the calls with dread
she tried to tell her family
what the doctor said.
Although she couldn’t see them
she knew just how they felt
winded by the blow
they had all been dealt.

That night she went to see her
and tucked her into bed
she hugged her daughter tightly
and gently kissed her head
she softly said, “I love you”
and quietly shut the door
the tears welled in her eyes
she couldn’t hold back anymore.

“They’ll make me better, Mummy”
was ringing in her ears
her nightmares had come true
her deepest darkest fears.

Elaine Macfarlane Comments

Mary Reid 08 April 2014

heartwrenchingly beautiful

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Robin Dyer 07 April 2014

i loved it! it made me want to cry! ! ! you have a special gift use it wisely GOD BLESS! !

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Rhonda Baker 07 April 2014

Your Poem was so insightful, so many I personal know who have gone through this themselves and their children. You captured it perfectly. I felt the raw emotion. Beautifully written Rhonda Baker Williamston Mi

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