Lifejackets Poem by Elaine Macfarlane

Lifejackets

Rating: 4.5


Some days I feel I'm drowning
sinking way down low.
Some days I feel like giving up
and think I'd like to go.

But, looking up above me
I see a gleaming light.
I swim and kick and struggle
and push with all my might.

As I break upon the surface
I gasp and gulp for air.
I look all around me
and can't believe what's there.

Floating on the ocean
as far as I can see
lots of coloured lifejackets
waiting just for me.

As soon as I get near one
they wrap themselves around
and pull my weary body
to some safer ground.

'Where do they come from? '
I think I hear you say.
Well, they come from the people
I talk to every day.

People who understand
this journey we are on.
Whether it is short
whether it is long.

So, thank you my friends
that's all I'd like to say.
And, I hope I'll be a lifejacket for you someday!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marketa Richnavska 17 April 2014

amazingy written, you have a great talent, I love rhyming, I love the theme, I love the whole poem so so much, it's really beautiful...keep it up, you are strong :)

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Mark Dillon 06 April 2014

I've been there, great lines. Please read Times or When darkness calls, great writing, thanks.

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Jayne Davies 06 April 2013

Well written! Well done to you x

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Elaine Macfarlane

Elaine Macfarlane

East Kilbride, Scotland
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