Black Day Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Black Day

Rating: 5.0


No past
But to move fast
Catch up with time
We may miss sometimes

We have to be led
Before turn dead
Sentiments are not to come on the way
They are to be driven away

World is again threatened
Area of agreement is shortened
War clouds are hovering
It is almost worrying

Let us pray
To find way
Innocents are to spared
Peace is to be offered

It will be blacked day
If death knell finds its way
Peace may have far cry
Everybody must question and ask why?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 September 2013

No past But to move fast

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 September 2013

Wow Astrid Broco3 minutes ago Very good poem and very true Comment +1 needs some more work

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 September 2013

Robert Maxwell2 minutes ago No comment

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 September 2013

virginia tondreauLess than a minute ago Look at first paragraph Maybe have someone read the whole poem back to you I think subject is timely however Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago it my own... start with some new idea +1 Thoughtful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 September 2013

hanks dear, i loved your poem, but it´s sooo sad

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2013

20 hours ago « Delete » raj malik vry nice n so true too

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2013

» Deb E very good, but I don't see what the big deal is about death,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2013

Preeti Sabhar.. No past But to move fast Catch up with time We may miss sometimes

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2013

Juan José Unfortunately war is all ready knocking the door

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2013

catherine lajul All will regret.

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