~ Yum-Yum Zero n’ Nil ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
April 14,2010
[On the eve of Poila Vaishak ~ Bengali New Year Day my humble poetic posy ~ niv]
Caution ~Tension
Panacea option
Decoction potion
Full flush fluxion.
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Tension
High extinction
Quotient
Sure n’ Silent.
Burry in bay
Smile away.
Elision dungeon
Wallow freedom.
Bye bye
Felo-de-se
Yap yippee
Whoopee zippy
Twine tension in zappy.
Be dégagé blasé
Enjoy elegant En Masse.
Doubting still,
Your own kill
Sure then pay bill.
Yum-yum zero n’ nil
Zoom zing in zeal
Enkindle feel-free-fill.
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Zero is a complex word. Nil just a negated balance. Yummy Yummy for those who understand the fluid nothing.
Stress Buster Stress Cracker Stress Eraser Stress Extinguisher the call of day But how? Pundits have prescribed many psychic exercises and protocols. Poets simplified poetically ‘Elision dungeon/Wallow freedom.’ A type of constant contemplation of antithesis of ‘Wallow freedom’…indeed helpful… Conclusion is ‘Yum-yum zero n’ nil’ …where too much expectation stress ought to become florid and blossoming …sincere work and forget about the result Actually we’re result oriented than work orientation…the basic cause of stress… excellent style and construction…thanks 10++ PO PO
niv i did comment i do not know where it went i had said yum to me means wonderful and this poem is yummy
kinda like a chant... hahaha.... but of course, this is penned good...
interesting. i was going to stop at one word, but after reading at least parts of all the comments from your many fans i have decided to say more. i don't get it! ! ! ! but it held my interest to the end. you asked me to read one of your new poems and i haven't gotten to 'that one' yet. the ones with 'rape' and 'lingerie' in their titles are ones i feel i want to look at, but i won't be surprised if they surprise me. thanks for sharing, though your poem is not my ''cup of tea'. i DID enjoy reading through the list of titles. to quote a comment left here by another poet: Yummy Yummy for those who understand the fluid nothing. .....but i guess to many readers this poem is more than nothing. bri p.s. maybe you are a genius; i am not.
Yum, yum a great write. Well penned. Keep it up Thanks for sharing with me
Happy thoughts and happy memories....more melodies for all to dance to. Thanks fr sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
World is exploding not by population but by tension… Frowned face…horizontal / vertical forehead crease … Cordoned smiles… Imprisoned in Hi and Hello… Under time pressure… Is this life…? Slave of sleeping pills…modernity has robbed mainly free mind…what gizmo will do? Prescription is Be dégagé [Free and relaxed in manner] blasé [Nonchalantly unconcerned ] /Enjoy elegant En Masse. Thanks for sharing 10+++