~ Recipe Of My First Kiss ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Recipe Of My First Kiss ~

Rating: 4.8


RECIPE OF MY FIRST KISS
Ms. Nivedita
UK.
26.11.09.

‘Why you’,
Dame says,
‘Fear hiss
In first kiss? ’

~ DAME RECIPING ~

[1] Recipe of
Lip-Lock liquor
Brewing in
5 square centimeter
Lip arena beaut emitter.

[2] Adding: ~
Pentabyte of evocation,
Giga calorie of
Ebullient emotion,
Zillion luxe of imagination.
.
[3] Hues of lips’
Are crisscrossing
Tongues’ balleting
Mouth fresheners’
Fragrance swapping
Saliva immixing
[Of 10 ml LOL! ].


~ A FEW MINUTES AFTER ~

Propinquity...
Proximity…
Closing…
Nearing n’ togethering
Passionate conjoining
Heart beats merging
Pooch-ing n’ Pooch-ing
Lips splicing
Quivering n’ fluttering.
.
Hiked adrenaline
Feelings steeping
Deepening n’ diving
Smothering enlivening
Euphoriant levitating.

Voluptuous liquid firing
Every cells dancing
Flutter n’ quivering
Tipsiness joyous greening
Infatuation drinking
Unioned lapping
Solace gulping.


~ FINALLY ~

Dame says,
Hey Beau
It’s relation just
Zeroed lust!

First kiss
Why you
Fear hiss?
No: Its
Flowething bliss.

Happened like must
Juxtaposition of
Four lips in trust.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sreekala Sukumaran 06 June 2010

well written very lovely poem liked it 10+++

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Pranab K Chakraborty 11 June 2010

Happened like must Juxtaposition of Four lips in trust. Wildly fascinating fiesta but occasional lucidity are banned perhaps when the word 'trust' have been declared all of its end. Echoing again 'I have a promise to keep'. So hard such writing only a poet can feel its craft, we the reader are commonly not very literate to penetrate the feelings the poet tries to communicate, so misunderstood. Any way, feel good, go the next........... Regards 10+++ Apoet

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Amrit Rathi 17 June 2010

A unique expression of the first kiss! It's marvelous, unmatched on PH, you are a godess poetess. I loved your poem 10++++. Read mine '.I've Fallen in Love. '.Thanks

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Satbir Bakshi 22 June 2010

niv you have a unique style-but you do manage to put across your point with unmatched eloquence and fever.pls send page no of yr ebook

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Matt Mooney 08 July 2010

A most unusual subject for a thesis but nevertheless a really enightening one! 10.

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Ray Quesada 04 October 2012

Another great poem, Niv! ! -RQ-

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Kevin Carney 26 December 2010

What a great write, its fun and light and so true. I really like the way you took you poem and wrote outside of the box. Loved it 10+++

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veronique buea pre 03 September 2010

dear Ms.niv lovely poem i loved it very much :)

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Paul Butters 30 August 2010

You clearly have NOT skimped your research N. ah ah. Your vocabulary is impressive, very. High marks fr originality again. P.

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Marina Gasbey 03 August 2010

Wow, your way of writing surprises me every time, you are a great poet. Very intelligent as well, you could probably describe anything in the world! Thank you so much for sharing! .... Marina...

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