Marieta Maglas

Silver Star - 3,871 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

Your Words Of Love - Poem by Marieta Maglas

I have seemingly missed your words of love,
Those words that were written in the sand
And erased by the first wave.
Do you remember, my love?
I have enclosed them hermetically
With that last kiss.
And, after that,
Another kiss
And another exotic beach
And another feeling, autumnal feeling,
Of another ostensible seemingly love
Fulfilled my nothingness...
Among corals and shells,
Dried by the winds of the sea,
I awake in following my lost steps,
Taken by the waves
And redirected to the great unknown in the sea,
That great eternal.....
I still love you,
I love you more, miss you more.
Yes, I still miss you
And I realize that all I can do now
Is to lodge near the moan of the sea sand,
Which feels like a silk slipped worn-out dress,
When I touch it.
And slantingly I elect the oblivion,
When
I want to kiss again and again
Your gray-haired temple,
But, in reverting, I receive only
The kiss of our child...


Comments about Your Words Of Love by Marieta Maglas

  • Nilima Deb Nilima Deb (7/9/2016 7:35:00 AM)

    a stunning write..great...loved the waves of wording..excellent. (Report) Reply

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  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/12/2016 5:40:00 AM)

    I have seemingly missed your words of love,
    Those words that were written in the sand
    And erased by the first wave.
    Do you remember, my love?
    I have enclosed them hermetically
    With that last kiss.
    And, after that,
    Another kiss
    And another exotic beach
    And another feeling, autumnal feeling,
    Of another ostensible seemingly love
    Fulfilled my nothingness...
    Beautiful lines reflecting your love so deep and so rare.

    I want to kiss again and again
    Your gray-haired temple,
    But, in reverting, I receive only
    The kiss of our child...
    I loved these lines.
    Thanks for sharing this nice poem.
    Subhas (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (9/17/2015 4:24:00 AM)

    Another kiss! With the muse of life and love. Nice piece. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (7/15/2015 9:34:00 AM)

    Kisses of child are purer than purest.Such kisses are heavenly blessings which have no part. Very touching and emotional write. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • The Princess The Princess (7/1/2015 5:43:00 AM)

    A wonderful write and very powerful. Love leaves us many emotions and it is beautifully written in this poem. the ending does surprise the reader but leaves a very lasting impression. A true 10! (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Brick Daniel Brick (6/23/2015 10:41:00 AM)

    This is an intense, heartfelt poem in which you are speaking to a part of yourself, the bereft, still longing part that can't or won't heal the wound of love. Why not? I'm no expert in the Art of Love, just a foot soldier in the Army of Amours, but it seems to me if the wound was healed you would have severed all hope, and your soul cannot face that prospect yet. There are degrees of pain and this pain of unrequited love is still bearable but the pain of lost love is too traumatic to deal with in the time-frame of the poem. I read the many comments on this poem. The last one by Ibrar Siddiqi is especially poignant and must make you proud to have written this poem. It has increased even salvaged the love in his marriage. What an amazing rescue your poem has accomplished in the real world!
    Who says poetry is unreal, only decorative, impractical? Here is proof that a True Poem can work a natural miracle. (Report) Reply

  • Sudipta Bhattacharyya Sudipta Bhattacharyya (6/1/2015 8:30:00 AM)

    Very touchy & heartfelt emotions! Stirring my own personal romantic feelings!
    Thanks for sharing such a piece of art! (Report) Reply

  • Allotey Abossey (5/22/2015 2:11:00 AM)

    Love is a gift.. It's nice talking about emotions by way of poetry. God bless you (Report) Reply

  • Stan Petrovich (1/23/2015 8:51:00 AM)

    My word! A supreme seaside erotica...I have done them myself but not half as well. You are truly an inspiration. Look, if you can, at my reply to this wonderful poem, titled In the Mists of Sand. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A Ramesh T A (1/6/2015 2:07:00 PM)

    Indeed kiss is the response for the words of love! But the surprising thing here is kiss of the child at the end! (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad Akhtar Jawad (11/21/2014 8:55:00 PM)

    An amazing work of art, a poem that touches the emotions and sentiments............10 (Report) Reply

  • Col Muhamad Khalid Khan Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/4/2014 2:37:00 AM)

    I have seemingly missed your words of love,
    Those words that were written in the sand
    And erased by the first wave.
    Love is like words written in the sand depicts the transitoriness of love which remains on alter of life until rewarded.
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (7/5/2014 12:58:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem love lost gone with the wind with love still burning in the home fires
    with the kiss of the child much comfort...hmmmm...regards (Report) Reply

  • Simon Yel (12/15/2011 1:21:00 PM)

    it is actually very interesting and exciting.if love could be like this I hope there could be no divorce between partners in love (Report) Reply

  • Madeleine Clarkson (5/9/2011 12:12:00 PM)

    What a beautiful poem, truly remarkable! 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Yoseph Lupu Yoseph Lupu (5/1/2011 7:00:00 AM)

    Very touching, till the climas of it! (Report) Reply

  • Samantha Smith (4/20/2011 10:34:00 AM)

    good job..I like it (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle Romeo Della Valle (4/18/2011 7:03:00 PM)

    Absolutely beautiful write and I wonder why you are one of the top and so admired by everyone! God Bless for always! ! ... (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar Dr.subhendu Kar (3/24/2011 10:29:00 AM)

    love intense yet silhouettes on the sands of time
    heart seems to mill in sea of sorrow yet not befalling, fantastic write by the passion, that makes the reader look back in meandering....as i do remember..., unique style,10+++., thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Ray Seymour (2/15/2011 12:18:00 PM)

    I really liked this poem. A lot. All but the last two lines, which come on too hard; and, if I were you, I'd soften them - for the sake of not spoiling the mood. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 14, 2013


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