Marieta Maglas

Veteran Poet - 1,563 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

Your Words Of Love - Poem by Marieta Maglas

I have seemingly missed your words of love,
Those words that were written in the sand
And erased by the first wave.
Do you remember, my love?
I have enclosed them hermetically
With that last kiss.
And, after that,
Another kiss
And another exotic beach
And another feeling, autumnal feeling,
Of another ostensible seemingly love
Fulfilled my nothingness...
Among corals and shells,
Dried by the winds of the sea,
I awake in following my lost steps,
Taken by the waves
And redirected to the great unknown in the sea,
That great eternal.....
I still love you,
I love you more, miss you more.
Yes, I still miss you
And I realize that all I can do now
Is to lodge near the moan of the sea sand,
Which feels like a silk slipped worn-out dress,
When I touch it.
And slantingly I elect the oblivion,
When
I want to kiss again and again
Your gray-haired temple,
But, in reverting, I receive only
The kiss of our child...


Comments about Your Words Of Love by Marieta Maglas

  • Bronze Star - 2,731 Points The Princess (7/1/2015 5:43:00 AM)

    A wonderful write and very powerful. Love leaves us many emotions and it is beautifully written in this poem. the ending does surprise the reader but leaves a very lasting impression. A true 10! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,839 Points Daniel Brick (6/23/2015 10:41:00 AM)

    This is an intense, heartfelt poem in which you are speaking to a part of yourself, the bereft, still longing part that can't or won't heal the wound of love. Why not? I'm no expert in the Art of Love, just a foot soldier in the Army of Amours, but it seems to me if the wound was healed you would have severed all hope, and your soul cannot face that prospect yet. There are degrees of pain and this pain of unrequited love is still bearable but the pain of lost love is too traumatic to deal with in the time-frame of the poem. I read the many comments on this poem. The last one by Ibrar Siddiqi is especially poignant and must make you proud to have written this poem. It has increased even salvaged the love in his marriage. What an amazing rescue your poem has accomplished in the real world!
    Who says poetry is unreal, only decorative, impractical? Here is proof that a True Poem can work a natural miracle. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 787 Points Sudipta Bhattacharyya (6/1/2015 8:30:00 AM)

    Very touchy & heartfelt emotions! Stirring my own personal romantic feelings!
    Thanks for sharing such a piece of art! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,460 Points Allotey Abossey (5/22/2015 2:11:00 AM)

    Love is a gift.. It's nice talking about emotions by way of poetry. God bless you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 204 Points Stan Petrovich (1/23/2015 8:51:00 AM)

    My word! A supreme seaside erotica...I have done them myself but not half as well. You are truly an inspiration. Look, if you can, at my reply to this wonderful poem, titled In the Mists of Sand. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 878 Points Ramesh T A (1/6/2015 2:07:00 PM)

    Indeed kiss is the response for the words of love! But the surprising thing here is kiss of the child at the end! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,000 Points Akhtar Jawad (11/21/2014 8:55:00 PM)

    An amazing work of art, a poem that touches the emotions and sentiments............10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,457 Points Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/4/2014 2:37:00 AM)

    I have seemingly missed your words of love,
    Those words that were written in the sand
    And erased by the first wave.
    Love is like words written in the sand depicts the transitoriness of love which remains on alter of life until rewarded.
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,625 Points Ken E Hall (7/5/2014 12:58:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem love lost gone with the wind with love still burning in the home fires
    with the kiss of the child much comfort...hmmmm...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Simon Yel (12/15/2011 1:21:00 PM)

    it is actually very interesting and exciting.if love could be like this I hope there could be no divorce between partners in love (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madeleine Clarkson (5/9/2011 12:12:00 PM)

    What a beautiful poem, truly remarkable! 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 47 Points Yoseph Lupu (5/1/2011 7:00:00 AM)

    Very touching, till the climas of it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samantha Smith (4/20/2011 10:34:00 AM)

    good job..I like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 136 Points Romeo Della Valle (4/18/2011 7:03:00 PM)

    Absolutely beautiful write and I wonder why you are one of the top and so admired by everyone! God Bless for always! ! ... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 196 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (3/24/2011 10:29:00 AM)

    love intense yet silhouettes on the sands of time
    heart seems to mill in sea of sorrow yet not befalling, fantastic write by the passion, that makes the reader look back in meandering....as i do remember..., unique style,10+++., thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ray Seymour (2/15/2011 12:18:00 PM)

    I really liked this poem. A lot. All but the last two lines, which come on too hard; and, if I were you, I'd soften them - for the sake of not spoiling the mood. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Mohammad Akmal Nazir (2/7/2011 2:16:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem. A voice of every heart and a gem for the lovers.
    I couldn't help loving the poem for its fragile emotions and vivid imagery.
    Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fayssal Chafaki (10/19/2010 4:00:00 PM)

    Poetic, Marieta! You took us through an adventure. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Liz Williams (9/9/2010 9:10:00 AM)

    gorgeous. if i could give it eleven i would. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ibrar Siddiqi (9/3/2010 2:17:00 PM)

    Marieta - a beautiful poem - as everyone has felt - love is like the sea - tkaes you to new shores, swim with different fish from the School of Life and it can fdorwn you, consume you.

    Thi spoem made me feel sad as i wished i met my wife when i was younger, i felt like a well worn sailor who visted too many ports - to have read your poem has made me reinforce my love for my soulamte and wife

    Thanks


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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 14, 2013


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