Your Absence Poem by Anya Garcia

Your Absence

Rating: 5.0


The broken pieces
of my heart try
to find a way to mend.

But, it's the silence
your absence gives
that it cannot
comprehend.

This hearts all shattered
Pieces of me scattered
I don't feel like singing
My sorrows so deep
I feel it, I'm sinking.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A compelling cry from a hurting heart! Full of feeling my friend. Well done!

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Anya Garcia 05 March 2010

Yes, Mark all my poems are real and based on real life....even the one titled Immortal Craving even though what inspired it was a book, I did experience a feeling that once with an ex of mine....so yes...all my poems are true, all inspired by real events.

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Mark Anthony St. Rose 05 March 2010

very emotional piece. i really felt it. is this a true story though?

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